"I Want to Go Home!"
Unofficial Drabble Challenge

When SpaceX Dragon Capsule exploded on April 20, 2019, Tom Mueller, the lead propulsion engineer, followed Elon Musk into his office minutes after Musk burst out of the mission control room.
Musk was sitting at his desk, with his back to the door, bent over sobbing, face in his palms, his shoulders shaking. Tom approached and touched his shoulder, "Are you OK, Elon?"
Elon turned around and yelled in his face, "No, I'm not OK! I will never be able to go home! You humans can't get the propulsion right!"
Petrified Mueller was only able to whisper, "What are you?"
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100 words exactly make it a Drabble.
As many of you know, I love Drabbles and write a lot of them. I think it's time to put out an unofficial challenge. Here are your TORs:
Write a Drabble about Elon Musk, who is an alien, trying to go home. In one of his interviews he himself mentioned that he might be a 3,000-year-old time-traveling alien who got lost and is trying to get back to his home planet.
Your Drabble can be in any genre or form, including poetry, as long as it's exactly 100 words.
You can use my Drabble above as a spring board and develop or continue it in any direction, as long as it's exactly 100 words.
You can focus on anything - Musk's genius, his childhood or origin story, his companies, his human breeding program, his eating habits and lifestyle, his support of political causes - as long as it's exactly 100 words.
I guess you get the idea.
He must always want to go home.
Once you publish your story in Fiction, Poets, Critique or Writers Communities (I think those are the four that have no limit of minimum 600 words but I'd be happy to know if there are more), drop your link in the comments here.
I promise I will read them all and give small $1-5 tips to the ones I like, which will be probably most of them so you really have nothing to lose.
The deadline - October 31, 2025. I just want to add something other than horror to this month's avalanche of spooky stories.
About the Creator
Lana V Lynx
Avid reader and occasional writer of satire and short fiction. For my own sanity and security, I write under a pen name. My books: Moscow Calling - 2017 and President & Psychiatrist
@lanalynx.bsky.social
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Comments (31)
Shoot I missed this! Might have to join even if I’m past the deadline
Lana, mine is late, but thanks for the offer and read. My first drabble: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/katie-can-t-cut-it%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/alien-odyssey#comment-00c645ab-fdf1-43d1-b3ff-83c18c38a47c%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Sent him to space, Lana.
Thanks for this fun little challenge idea. Here's my meager entry https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/lone-skum%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Enjoy!
Brilliant challenge and really enjoyed taking part. Thanks Lana
Ah! That explains it. When I was chatting to Elon in a local pub the other day I thought he was looking a little wistful https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/oh-er-my-name-s-elon%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E?
Here's mine - couldn't resist! https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/construction-drabble%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Got one https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/the-canada-debacle%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I have a ratty one. https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/rats-and-elon-s-magic-hat%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This is such a fun challenge! https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/blue-eggs-and-wormholes%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Sounds like fun! I'll try to get something done in time.
Nice little challenge. I think drabbles are super cool and enjoyed yours, Lana. Congratulations on your leadership board placement. I just might attempt a drabble.💜
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Back to say congratulations on the leaderboard
Hey! I gave it a try! 😄 https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/grounded-gw4tc005u%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Ooo, this is interesting and fun! Can't wait to see the entries! 💖🌟
What, is this not horror? Worse than horror those two so and so. Just saw Sam's. Hilarious. On it...i hope
Love your Drabble and your challenge. Musk and all other billionaires are cold as lizards, I love the idea of satirizing them as aliens. But I don’t think aliens would be pleased by the association lol. Here’s my entry, I had lots of fun with your prompt: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/we-don-t-want-him%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Thanks for hosting such a creative challenge Lana :)
What a wonderful challenge, and you sure know how to get those creative juices flowing.
Whoaaa, he actually said that? Hahahahahaha. I had no idea! I'm not sure if Mr Brain would cooperate for this challenge but I'm looking forward to reading the entries Yes, there are more communities with no 600 word minimum requirement. Here are the ones that I remember: Art BookClub Chapters Critique Fiction Horror Poets Pride Wander Writers
Here's mine, Lana. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/exile-from-teslaris%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Complete with Elon's (cough cough) own artwork. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/blueprints-to-solitude%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here is mine https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/home-fn6uy0e0l%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
LOL! Lana, Stephanie introduced me to this challenge - I think it got lost in notifications land or something. Either way, I am in. Been needing more of an excuse to cut loose and get out of my deeply unpleasant mind. ha. Well done for running the challenge - loved your drabble and it's a tall order as you are something of a Queen of Drabbles, but I'm down.
OK, I might have had a little too much fun with what we talked about with him melting Trump's brain, but here's mine: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/elon-s-space-force%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">