We don’t want him!
For the Unofficial Drabble Challenge from Lana V Lynx, link below!
Musk sat under his basking lamp and moaned.
He clenched his fists and gnashed his teeth.
He hissed.
“I just wanna go home!”
If he were human he’d have shed tears.
300 light years away, but watching live via The Quantum Entangled Broadcast Service, the Galactic Coalition for Equity and Inclusion were deeply moved.
They voted to send a ship immediately.
In place of Musk they left a message:
“Sorry about Elon. Exiling Musk to your world caused harm. We’re transferring him to the uninhabited mildew planet, X-327. By way of apology, we’ll deport your human billionaires too! Back soon.”
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Comments (6)
Hahaha, good one - if only….
Haha great story. Love the note.
Hahahahahahaha yessss, please get rid of all the billionaires! Loved this!
Loved this, Sam! If only this could be true. Billionaires should have no place on earth.
I knew you would enter and I also know you would do well in this one. Lana has brought the very best out of you. This was hilariously good. In that it did well in placing musk in a place he was not wanted. Will never be needed. Then the note that was left, was the billion dollar note. Love this. Uninhabited mildew planet X- 327. Very cool sounding an perfect for the unwanted musk. Outstanding 🤗❤️🖤👏🏾👌🏾
Oh Lord, more challenges. u got this one. Do you see what is happening. what a crock we have become. exile them all