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When I'm Deprived Too Long

The Hunger Takes Control

By Lightning Bolt ⚡Published 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
There was nothing sweet about it 😒

Starved for affection

I dine on your fickle heart

Then shit out your 'love'.

~

____________Bolt

Haiku

About the Creator

Lightning Bolt ⚡

Bolt aka Bill, a bizarre bisexual bipolar epileptic⚡🧠 Taco Bell Futurist 🌮🔔

Top 📚s inHumor = Memes & LSD & Hell🔥Creepy Crazy Fiction⚡🩸Thrash!!🩸🔪

Poetry ~ Challenge ~ Winners!

Demons & Phobias & Prophets, oh my!

WiERd but not from Oz. 🤷

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  • Tiffany Gordon2 months ago

    😱 Amazing work Sweet Bill!

  • Oh wow that was in your face writing Great job

  • Cadma3 months ago

    This piece is honest and powerful; like the way you express longing, absence, and the emotional weight is both evocative and deeply felt. What I especially appreciated is the imagery…there’s a quiet urgency and rawness that lingered with me long after I finished reading.

  • Marie381Uk 3 months ago

    lol lol oh how this deserves triple top story your best ever lol ♦️😊♦️✍️🏆

  • Sandy Gillman3 months ago

    So brutal, and darkly poetic. I love that last line!

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