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Rude Awakening

Disturbing Morning Discoveries

By Lightning Bolt ⚡Published 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
Did I do this?

There's blood on my hands.

🩸 🩸 🩸

I found eyeballs in my bed.

Where did these come from?!?

👁

🩸

~

______________Bolt

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Lightning Bolt ⚡

Bolt aka Bill, a bizarre bisexual bipolar epileptic⚡🧠⚡ Taco Bell Futurist 🌮🔔

Top 📚s inHumor = Memes & LSD & Hell🔥

Creepy Crazy Fiction

🩸Thrash!!🩸🔪 WiERd but not from Oz. 🤷

Demons & Phobias & Prophets, oh my!

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  • Susan Fourtané about a month ago

    Spooky and funny and mysterious. That image!

  • well that was an eye opener!

  • Mark Graham3 months ago

    What a way to start a day. Kind of disgusting though and what an image. Good job.

  • Dana Crandell3 months ago

    Talk about a rude awakening! Great job, Bill!

  • Sara Wilson3 months ago

    Well that's a terrifying concept lol 😅 great work!

  • Mariann Carroll3 months ago

    Scary stuff 😬

  • Sid Aaron Hirji3 months ago

    awkward, terrifying and funny all at once

  • Sandy Gillman3 months ago

    Eyeballs in the bed, I love it! It’s amazing how you created such a strong sense of dread with so few words.

  • This was truly an eye opening read! 🌹🌹🌹🌹👀👀👁️

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