That Saturday in Summer
“This is how I remember it” Challenge
Summer’s sun beat down on my head
As two best friends wandered, wherever our feet led
Straight up the gravel road, past the huge shed
That stood idly staring at our vacant school.
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Precariously perched atop the fence, near the gates
Dangling our legs, hands waving at our mates
We chattered endlessly on about our pet ‘hates’
And the ‘Mean Girls’ who thought they were ’Cool’!
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Half an hour later, ambling down the green hill
We each grabbed a long chain swing… you’ll find them there still
Pendulums flying to and fro, or spinning sickeningly, swift enough to thrill
Anticipating an adrenaline rush… each screaming crazily like a fool.
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Next stop was a ride on our friend’s flying fox
Hands gripped tightly above my head wearing windblown curly locks
Hurtling down the hill, across the babbling stream's slippery rocks
To be deposited safely at the bank, like a precious jewel.
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Sounds of our laughter rang in the air
As we floated down that hill without a care
What fun we had, taking turns, happy to share
'Til, exhaustion set in... my body ran low on fuel.
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Zooming down, down, down was sweet and easy
But… clambering back up that slope, so slick and greasy
Puffing and panting, sweat dripping… it sure wasn’t breezy
Dragging the flying fox back to the hilltop, like a pack mule.
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A ‘cunning fox’, I flew down the hill, grinning like a clown
Then insisted my hapless buddy walk on down
“But that’s not fair!” She called back with a frown
I held my ground… oblivious! How could I be so cruel?
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She insisted, “Bring it back up, then we’ll go on our way!”
“As if! And let you do the same?” I responded in dismay
Back and forth the words shot, but nothing did sway
Either one of us from our stubborn stance in that duel.
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We, the best of friends, walked home silent… not uttering a word
Unbelievable! Both my bad behaviour and even more absurd
To discover decades later, her memory of this is so dim and blurred
What a true friend she was is, and me… what a ‘Tool’!
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My memory lingers long of that ‘clever’ trick
Most recollections fade like the mist, vanish in a flick
This one’s crystal clear… oh to be an amnesiac!
But far better to live by “The Golden Rule”.
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Author's note: Five fleeting decades later, my longsuffering friend recollects her reply as being: "That's not fair! How dare you pick on the weaker one!" My response was incredulous laughter. Hilarious to ever consider her as 'the weaker one'! I'm most grateful for that 'weaker one' sticking by me all these years.
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Comments (10)
Brilliant reflective diescription of looking back on youth - gorgeous
Beautifully-penned, Angie!
Things that seem so important at a point are actually trivial on hindsight. We should all look at relationships that way! And glad that you and your friend have worked it out too.
The the first time I heard of a flying fox. That's a fun playground
Loved this - it's funny how things seem so important in the moment, but in the grand scheme of things they aren't. I am glad you and your friend worked it out.
Thanks for the link to the "flying fox" I was imagining all sorts of wild things! I think we're more apt to remember the times we were in the wrong than the people we wronged when we're that young. Wonderful reflective and narrative poem, Angie!
A sun-soaked swing, a stubborn standoff, and a memory that outlived the moment — one summer day, two best friends, and the quiet lessons we carry for life. 🌞🛝👭
It’s wonderful your friend could forgive such a momentary lapse. Well done!
Grinning like a clown, I hope it's not a scary grin, lol. Loved your poem!
I love this! It bought back fond memories of being a kid during the summer school holidays!