Dawn dramatically staged her entrance
with spectacular, glittering brilliance
for all around to see…
if they cared to do so.
*
Celebrating her arrival were father and son
Daedalus hoped with Icarus, their escape would be won
by the impossibility of flight mastered on
cleverly crafted wings of wax coated feathers.
*
Today they’d escape King Minos and Crete!
Up, out of the palace to freedom so sweet
But first one final review of their plan
Timely reminder of the dangers at hand.
*
Icarus — my son — stay well above the ocean, lest your wings get wet
Steer clear of the sun, for the wax, it will melt… Don’t forget!
With a careless nod, Icarus launched gracefully into the air
Together they flew up, up and over the palace wall.
*
Euphorically rejoicing in their flawless escape
reckless Icarus made his fatal mistake
skimming too close to the sea was no threat
but the dazzling sun drew him higher and higher yet.
*
Heedless of his father’s frantic call
wax coated wings disintegrated… he began to fall
down, down to the murky depths of the sea
where he thrashed and flailed about, futilely.
*
Helplessly Daedalus gazed down at his son with regret
wondered forlornly how Icarus could so quickly forget
ignore his dire warnings
pay the ultimate price.
*
Inspired Poppy’s Greek Mythology Prompts: Icarus
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Comments (9)
Flying too close to the sun and a good retelling. It is one of my favorite Greek myths
I love this phrase 'spectacular, glittering brilliance'. That's wonderful.
This is awesome, Angie! 🤗 Been a while since I've heard the story of Icarus and his wings. Honestly, I prefer your version of it through poetry, haha. I can only assume you're an expert on Greek Mythology (I won't hear otherwise).
This is excellent Angie, and I hope it places! You've done a great job of putting rhyme into the classic tale, and also mentioned the oft-forgotten other piece of advice Daedalus gives to his son (I wrote on this for the History Forgotten Challenge so it's fresh in my mind haha). "Euphorically rejoicing in their flawless escape"- something about this line just stands out to me. Nicely done😊
Oh I love a good take on Icarus! Even better as this is an EXCELLENT piece!
Wonderfully wrought, Angie! A great retelling of the myth!
Poor Icarus. Loved your take on the prompt!
Simple detail beautifully presented, one to be very proud of Angie!
This is such a stunning retelling.