
With June's prompt, we wanted to do something we hadn't done in a while. So when Judey suggested we do a Found Poem Challenge for this month, we were like, "Okay, yeah, that sounds great." We promptly forgot all the other ideas for challenges and set about ironing out any details that needed their wrinkles flattened.
For any of you who do not know what a found poem is, it is a form of poetry that borrows words or phrases from another source and restructures them in a poetic format. For more details, follow the link below. ⤵ ⤵ ⤵
ViMs June Prompt Instructions:
- Write a poem that includes words or phrases from Edgar A. Poe's The Sleeper.
- Minimum 200-word poem.
- The words you use need to appear in the poem in BOLD. They don't need to be beside each other.
- Link this article in an A/N in your piece
- Submit to Poet Community
- Post a link to your poem in the comments of this article.
- * EDIT -- I shouldn't have to say this, but absolutely NO AI allowed!!
Important Challenge Dates
- June 5, 2025, - June 25, 2025 = Entries Open
- June 26, 2025 - July 3, 2025 = Voting on Entries
Prizes
- First Place = $5
- Second Place = $2
- Third Place - $1
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For a little inspiration, to get you all going, I've listed Poe's poem below.
The Sleeper
By Edgar Allan Poe
At midnight, in the month of June,
I stand beneath the mystic moon.
An opiate vapor, dewy, dim,
Exhales from out her golden rim,
And softly dripping, drop by drop,
Upon the quiet mountain top,
Steals drowsily and musically
Into the universal valley.
The rosemary nods upon the grave;
The lily lolls upon the wave;
Wrapping the fog about its breast,
The ruin moulders into rest;
Looking like Lethe, see! the lake
A conscious slumber seems to take,
And would not, for the world, awake.
All Beauty sleeps!—and lo! where lies
Irene, with her Destinies!
*
Oh, lady bright! can it be right—
This window open to the night?
The wanton airs, from the tree-top,
Laughingly through the lattice drop—
The bodiless airs, a wizard rout,
Flit through thy chamber in and out,
And wave the curtain canopy
So fitfully—so fearfully—
Above the closed and fringéd lid
’Neath which thy slumb’ring soul lies hid,
That, o’er the floor and down the wall,
Like ghosts the shadows rise and fall!
Oh, lady dear, hast thou no fear?
Why and what art thou dreaming here?
Sure thou art come o’er far-off seas,
A wonder to these garden trees!
Strange is thy pallor! strange thy dress!
Strange, above all, thy length of tress,
And this all solemn silentness!
*
The lady sleeps! Oh, may her sleep,
Which is enduring, so be deep!
Heaven have her in its sacred keep!
This chamber changed for one more holy,
This bed for one more melancholy,
I pray to God that she may lie
Forever with unopened eye,
While the pale sheeted ghosts go by!
*
My love, she sleeps! Oh, may her sleep,
As it is lasting, so be deep!
Soft may the worms about her creep!
Far in the forest, dim and old,
For her may some tall vault unfold—
Some vault that oft hath flung its black
And wingéd pannels fluttering back,
Triumphant, o’er the crested palls
Of her grand family funerals—
*
Some sepulchre, remote, alone,
Against whose portals she hath thrown,
In childhood, many an idle stone—
Some tomb from out whose sounding door
She ne’er shall force an echo more,
Thrilling to think, poor child of sin!
It was the dead who groaned within.
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Comments (27)
Cutting it close, I don't think I'll make this one, but looking forward to reading the entries!
Hey, MC! You may have already seen it, but here is the entry: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-cold-hand-ew1v9r0ym8%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E I hope you like it!
Here you go, Sharon and team - https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/regression-i0401006yp%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E - it's not exactly a cheery one lol.
Congrats on your winning week.
Here’s my attempt: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/my-love-the-lady-irene%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
A fascinating challenge.
MC, this is such a great challenge idea!! I really need to get my butt in gear and start paying attention when you lay out challenges! 😅 Congrats on third place for this week's leaderboard!!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I am absolutely terrible at any kind of prescribed poetry. If you tell me I have to use specific words, it's like opening the top of my skull and throwing a spanner in there. I look forward to reading the entries though.
I find this intriguing, though come the 25th I fear you shall still find me wanting.
I gave it a try and here's what I came up with :) https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-myth-called-death%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This seems like a cool challenges
I'm so down for this. Love Found anything, and I love Poe. Before I started poeting about like a nutcase, The Raven along with Tam O Shanter (By Rabbie Burns) and (Do Not Go Gently Into That Good Night by Dylan Thomas) was my favourite poem.
Okay, I whipped a little something together. I've already read a few wonderful pieces. It will be a tough choice for the judge(s). https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/killing-myself-softly%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Right up my alley! I’ll come up with something
Here it is. Webster and I had quite the reunion while working on this poem. I even had to look up a few of Poe's words to grasp their meaning. https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-room-below-the-kitchen-for-the-unofficial-poe-found-vi-ms-june-prompt-challenge%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This is a fantastic challenge, I would love to do more like this! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/where-ravens-circle-the-sleeper%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Coming in with an entry!
Here is mine https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/nessun-dorma-os1af0gzq%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I love the works of Edgar Allan Poe.
Hmmm. This is interesting. Let me.think on it awhile.
I absolutely love this poem it's one of my favorites! I'm also going to enjoy this challenge. Just to clarify, we can use words from the poem as long as they're in bold letters, correct? So, in other words, the words can be scattered out throughout the poem?
Just so my big, dumb brain comprehends the rules, are we allowed to incorporate our own words in the Found Poem alongside Edgar's? Or are we only supposed to use Edgar's lines/words? Sorry for the questions, MC 🙏 I checked examples of Found Poems and saw a lot using only the text of the given poem.
MoCo!- you did a wonderful explanation!
Oooo, this seems intriguing! So we need to use words or phrases from this poem. But the meaning or theme of the poem can be entirely different?