Looking toward the future, I stare into the past Seeing how I matured, the memories come fast I wish I could change a few things I was unwise to do
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By Mother Combs9 months ago in Writers
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Become a paid subscriber to get access.A beautiful poem, that shows longing - hope-and-regret. I wish I could change a few things that I was unwise to do. We will seal the deal with a lovers kiss. Beautiful love poem. Nicely Done!!!
Oh this is nice. My heart feels all toasty now.
Beautiful, and so heartwarming. Love your poems.
Definitely felt the line about wishing my path had led to my love quicker. A lovely poem!
Fabulous! Love this line: Mostly, I wanted my path to have led quicker to you
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Nice story
I love this MC!! I think a lot of us feel this way about our person, very relatable!!
Well-wrought! To find love after much trial is like turning our face to the sun on a cold day. The warmth and light are beacons which guide us home.
Beautiful - I love this. Well done.
Awww, this was so sweet. Loved your poem!
To great relationships, Sharon. This was lovely.
Learning to love within new arms. An uplifting poem with hope
A blessed & wondrous relationship to share with one another.
Such a beautiful poem filled with love and longing!