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My love… The Lady Irene

Poe-Found Poem: ViMs June Prompt

By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶Published 7 months ago Updated 7 months ago 3 min read
My love… The Lady Irene
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One bright night, in the month of June,

I stand alone, above all, upon a quiet mountain top

beneath a bright mystic moon.

Fog steals softly, dripping, drop by drop,

wave upon wave, into the valley,

as Irene, my Beauty sleeps.

Drowsily, she exhales, so musically

I pray to God her slumb’ring soul does keep.

To the holy God in heaven, I pray.

My Love, she sleeps! Oh, her sleep is so deep!

Lo! I fear she is looking like the grave

Oh, my dear lady, I hast come to fear

Thy pallor is so like a lily, so strange,

Thou art not laughingly dreaming here.

A deep melancholy hast come to creep so solemn and strange

so fitfully about the lily fringéd lake…

fearfully I wonder about my love as she lies

Irene, forever with unopened eye… not awake

while the world like pale sheeted ghosts go by!

I pray to God he will not take

my love, while deep in her slumber, her sleep.

Thrilling to think, poor Irene nods upon her breast

exhales a triumphant echo from deep

silentness… Sure, she comes back from her quiet rest.

I pray:

My Holy God,

Awake my love…

golden beauty

Lady Irene!

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A/N: My first ever attempt at a Found Poem, for the challenge below.

All words used, are contained in the original poem:

“The Sleeper” by Edgar Allan Poe (see below).

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The Sleeper

By Edgar Allan Poe

At midnight, in the month of June,

I stand beneath the mystic moon.

An opiate vapor, dewy, dim,

Exhales from out her golden rim,

And softly dripping, drop by drop,

Upon the quiet mountain top,

Steals drowsily and musically

Into the universal valley.

The rosemary nods upon the grave;

The lily lolls upon the wave;

Wrapping the fog about its breast,

The ruin moulders into rest;

Looking like Lethe, see! the lake

A conscious slumber seems to take,

And would not, for the world, awake.

All Beauty sleeps!—and lo! where lies

Irene, with her Destinies!

*

Oh, lady bright! can it be right—

This window open to the night?

The wanton airs, from the tree-top,

Laughingly through the lattice drop—

The bodiless airs, a wizard rout,

Flit through thy chamber in and out,

And wave the curtain canopy

So fitfully—so fearfully—

Above the closed and fringéd lid

’Neath which thy slumb’ring soul lies hid,

That, o’er the floor and down the wall,

Like ghosts the shadows rise and fall!

Oh, lady dear, hast thou no fear?

Why and what art thou dreaming here?

Sure thou art come o’er far-off seas,

A wonder to these garden trees!

Strange is thy pallor! strange thy dress!

Strange, above all, thy length of tress,

And this all solemn silentness!

*

The lady sleeps! Oh, may her sleep,

Which is enduring, so be deep!

Heaven have her in its sacred keep!

This chamber changed for one more holy,

This bed for one more melancholy,

I pray to God that she may lie

Forever with unopened eye,

While the pale sheeted ghosts go by!

*

My love, she sleeps! Oh, may her sleep,

As it is lasting, so be deep!

Soft may the worms about her creep!

Far in the forest, dim and old,

For her may some tall vault unfold—

Some vault that oft hath flung its black

And wingéd pannels fluttering back,

Triumphant, o’er the crested palls

Of her grand family funerals—

*

Some sepulchre, remote, alone,

Against whose portals she hath thrown,

In childhood, many an idle stone—

Some tomb from out whose sounding door

She ne’er shall force an echo more,

Thrilling to think, poor child of sin!

It was the dead who groaned within.

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  • Judey Kalchik 6 months ago

    Good heavens- all of the words? That's amazing, coherent, and a great story arc.

  • Euan Brennan7 months ago

    Sorry, I had to come over here again and give you a comment you deserve! 💛 It's incredible that this is your first found poem (I've been reading your poetry here and there, so maybe I shouldn't be too surprised that you knocked it out of the ball park with this one considering how amazing they've all been). I don't envy how long this would have taken, haha. But please know you have created masterpiece and you can and should stand proud 👏🤗

  • D.K. Shepard7 months ago

    Wonderful, Angie!! Haven't tried a found poem in ages, but you've clearly got a knack for it!

  • Lamar Wiggins7 months ago

    Nicely done, Angie!!! I'm super impressed at what you did with the prompt!

  • Mother Combs7 months ago

    This is a first attempt? Well done, Angie!

  • Sean A.7 months ago

    Amazingly done! I don’t think anyone’s going to come close to that

  • Cristal S.7 months ago

    Woww! I 100% agree with previous comments! This is seriously impressive! Amazing! ✨

  • Whoaaaa, this is so freaking impressive! Not even one added word, all are solely from that poem! Whoaaaa! You blew my mind with this!

  • Oh wow! Very good very Poe! Completely impressed

  • Shirley Belk7 months ago

    Absolutely brilliant, Angie! You channeled Poe!

  • That took a lot of work, and is very impressive. Mine used at least one word per line, but all coming from the poem was too difficult for me. Excellent fo the challenge

  • Andrea Corwin 7 months ago

    I love this, Angie. The parts that begins with the rosemary nods and goes on his beautiful.. (did the prompt say you have to bold the words that you’re using in your poem from Edgar‘s poem…?) Just thought I’d mention that. This one sounds too difficult and like it will break bruise my brain, but I loved yours.❤️

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