Dollar Challenge - Dead Inside But Caffeinated (October/November edition)
The responses to my October challenge, and a prompt for you for November.
It's that time again!
First of all, here's the challenge I set for October:
Here's the prompt:
Only in our dreams are we free. The rest of the time, we need wages.
-T. Pratchett
The Responses
Antoni entered two. Got a bit festive with this one:
Sarah Parker
Jbaz:
Mikeydred:
Matthew Fromm:
Ian Read:
Paul Stewart:
Leslie Writes:
Laura Pruett:
A shiny silver dollar is winging its way to my favourites!
November Challenge
L.C. Schäfer's One Dollar Challenge - Quote Me Baby (Espresso Edition)
The Prompt
She was like a shot of espresso
-Andrew Garfield
You might recognise him from such films as: The Amazing Spiderman, The Social Network, and Hacksaw Ridge. I think he's talking about his co-star Emma Stone in this quote.
I thought, how bloody lovely! We all need someone in our lives who is that to us. Someone who brings a little fizz, a little zing. Especially in November, I think.
So: your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to write a microfiction story inspired by or including this quote. You can interpret it any way you'd like. I'll link the interview clip at the end if you'd like the context. There should be a character in it who is the "shot of espresso", and for full marks, this should be based on a zesty person from your own life.
Them's the rules
Word count: As always, 300-600 words.
Author's note: Please include an author's note if necessary to bring your piece up to Vocal's 600 word minimum for the Fiction community. I always read the note! I love to read about the story behind the story.
Prize: Same as usual, I'll tip my favourites a dollar each.
Winners: Again, same as always! If there's only a few entries, I'll just pick one or two people. If more than 10 people enter, I'll pick 3. More than 20, I'll pick 5.
Content: You can include the quote, in which case it should feel like it belongs. Or your story can be inspired by it, in which case the link should be clear.
Limits: This is a microfiction challenge, but you can submit basically anything and I'll give it a look, provided it fits the prompt. I would actually love to see some poetry for this one! I'm not usually a fan of romance, but this might be perfect for the prompt, so go wild and hit me with it.
If there are lots of responses, the microfiction ones that fit the prompt will most likely ones I tip. Stories over the word count, will be the ones I skip. You can submit as many as you like, but if there are loads of submissions (I'm not anticipating there will be) then I'm only promising to read the first two from each person.
Closing date: 11:59PM GMT, Saturday 30th November 2024
Really important: Please do link your story below! I would be gutted to miss anyone.
If you aren't a Vocal+ member: You can still enter and leave your link in the comments on Facebook, or DM it to me. I will leave a link to this challenge in the following Facebook groups:
Great Incantations: A Group Dedicated to Writing Challenges
Post it in one of the nine berjillion Vocal Facebook groups and tag me so I don't miss it! Send it to me on Facebook Messenger! Use smoke signals! Nail a hard copy to a pigeon.
Here's my Facebook profile: L.C. Schäfer
Before you go...
If you can think of a quote from a song, book, or film that you think would make a good prompt, please let me know! Talk to me in the comments. I am open to suggestions, and will tip you if I use yours.
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Thank you for reading!
If you took part in October, THANK YOU!
If you give it a bash in November, THANK YOU!!
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Comments (34)
I forgot to link this https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/thoughts-of-garfield%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
Here's my entry! https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/searching-for-sparks%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Also here is a suggestion for a quote: "We don't see things as they are, we see things as we are". Its often attributed to Anais Nin, 1961, but the origin is disputed. this article breaks it down really interesting (I didn't write it. google gave it to me when I was trying to figure out how to properly attribute it) https://quoteinvestigator.com/2014/03/09/as-we-are
Just read Paul’s entry & discovered your challenge… looks fun!
MAnaged to get this together earlier in the month. This is actually rather sweet and stuff, which is not really my usual modus operandi. Also, as per the guidelines, the shot of espresso in my story is someone from my life. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/their-little-brown-espresso-n2n5y0i7h%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/moments-we-re-given%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Here is my submission into the Challenge And congratulations on your top placement on the leader board
Back to say congrats on Most popular story this week LC!! 🎉
Congratulations 💕🏆
Back to say congratulations on placing first for Most Popular Stories on this week's leaderboard with this piece! Well done!
Okay, this one might be disturbing/upsetting for people, so click with care: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/i-ll-take-a-double?via=laura-pruett
Here's my entry: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/high-strung%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E.%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
My little story to your promt: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/a-wake-up-call-in-purple%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I shall put my thinking. creating, word abuse, hat on and see what I can come up with. Though, I might hold off on this one as there are a few things going on in my mind right now. 100, Nano, Fantasy Prologue, E-word for Penny, lol...the neverending list. Yours is definitely fitting in there, and I love that quote and kinda love Andrew Garfield even though he was a quite good Peter Parker but rubbish Spidey. He always seems like such a good egg and has a funny accent because of his dual nationality! Anyway, well done on another intriguing and inspiring challenge!
Love the challenge but um NGL...this got rather silly https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/love-punched%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I love this challenge, and will have a think. Can’t promise but will definitely consider it. Sometimes I get overwhelmed by stuff and can’t write, but I love the idea of this so let’s see 🤗
Sounds like fun! 😀
Here is mine https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/there-can-only-be-one-0h4y406b6%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here's a little something for this one: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/castles-in-the-sky-56d490oxc%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I love the prompt and it matches my mood already! I do feel suddenly caffeinated ever since November started. I will make sure to finally participate in this lovely challenge! Count me in.
I'll add it to the VSS Unofficial Challenge thread here https://www.facebook.com/groups/376191867241324/permalink/1094482395412264
Love this challenge - count me in!
Thanks for the mention, LC. Maybe I’ll try again this month 😊
Here is my entry. Cool idea this challenge. Helps me practice writing stories since I'm mainly a poet. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/kate-1z9qo04zp%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I think I'm that shot of espresso, so someone write about me please. Hahahahahahahaha gosh how self-absorbed can I get 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Okay, okay, okay!!! I've finally built up some capacity to try to enter one of these!! 😅 So excited that I'm finally letting myself join some of your madness!!
Mr. Schafer i am here in your comment to happily tell i like how you were happy reaching to people concerning my top story post well done😊. you can kindly go back check my comments to know certain things you will be happy there friend. oh as a writer there is more you need to learn, just read more okay and after reading you will find my new story Mrs Ariel Joseph you will love it too😊