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Beautiful banana palms…

Shirley Belk’s, “I Bet You Were Cute as a Child!” unofficial DRABBLE challenge

By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶Published 7 months ago 1 min read
Beautiful banana palms…
Photo by M Rishal on Unsplash

Please may I leave the table?

I ask, baby blue eyes wide, guileless.

Yes, when you’ve eaten all your food!

I grumpily toss my golden curls, glaring at my plate. No way will I eat this for breakfast! Not rubbery tripe swimming in a pool of crunchy onion, white sauce! Sneakily, fork piled high with yummy potato, remaining mess thinly spread across the plate and hidden under my cutlery, I repeat my request.

After this forkful, can I leave the table?

Yes,

comes the terse permission.

Cheeks bulging, I sprint to the bathroom window and spit into waiting banana trees.

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A/N: Thankfully, we lived in a high block house with benevolent banana palms growing outside the bathroom window! Handy solution for disposing of a detestable dish!

Desperate times, sneaky strategies!

My first ever Drabble, written for the challenge below:

AdviceLifeWriting Exercise

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Angie the Archivist 📚🪶

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  • Shirley Belk6 months ago

    part I loved the best: the "waiting" banana trees! Cute girl?...most definitely! Guileless?...well, the jury is still out on that one...lol But still, very, very polite and obedient...make that clever :) So love our Angie! Now I can't help but to think of you when I see a banana...

  • Joe O’Connor6 months ago

    Super relatable to anyone who remembers being forced to eat food that they didn't like haha. "Not rubbery tripe swimming in a pool of crunchy onion"- love the description in this one Angie! Drabbles are tricky things, but you've done well here:)

  • Too funny. We’ve all been there especially my eight year old she’d love some banana trees

  • D.K. Shepard7 months ago

    Haha! How charming and clever, Angie! And I'm not surprised at all!

  • Susan Fourtané 7 months ago

    That was very sneaky and funny, indeed! :D

  • Lana V Lynx7 months ago

    Sneaky, Angie! Cute Drabble.

  • Rachel Deeming7 months ago

    Fun!

  • I can't figure out what food was that from your description 😅😅 But that was so sneaky of you, lol!

  • Caroline Craven7 months ago

    Desperate times. Sneaky strategies. Love this!

  • Tiffany Gordon7 months ago

    Cute stuff! Thx 4 sharing!

  • Sandy Gillman7 months ago

    Hehe, this made me chuckle. I remember doing things like this as a kid. I learnt to spit it in a napkin, feed it to the dog, or sometimes I was really cheeky and I'd put some food on my sister's plate after my parents left the table.

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