Willow
A chain link to an original for the Kenny Penn's 'haikuplet' Challenge.
By Lamar WigginsPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Rodion Kutsaiev on Unsplash
Green leaf on fresh snow
She sleeps with his sweater vest
Night of still, cold air.
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Dreams of frosted hue,
his woven face petrifies
in her mind's third eye.
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The original written by Mackenzie Davis
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Lamar Wiggins
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Comments (18)
Beautiful link to add to the chain!
The mystery builds! I especially love dreams of frosted hue! The pic is beautiful and a great addition to the poem!
Fabulous work! So stunning!! 🤩
Brilliant & beautiful!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
What a great chain, Lamar! Excellent second stanza!
“Her mind’s third eye” - love it! Impressive haiku, Lamar!
Very nice! I hadn't heard of this challenge but what a fun idea! Great job, Lamar!
Oh.. this was a wonderful surprise! I love the imagery and the way to pairs so well with that first Haiku!!! Nicely done Lamar!
This is wonderful. Great job on the link.
Oh wow, the imagery here is phenomenal!!
Breathtaking! I loved this!
I was captured; so delicate and sensual. Truly lovely.
Oh wow, that blew my mind! So well done!
Beautiful! 💌
Seamless!
Wonderful continuity and really develops the theme. Well done Lamar
Oh man, this is a great link, Lamar! We’ll done!
I love it!