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The rain.

Written for Kenny Penn's Haikuplet Challenge! Try your pen at reinterpreting/continuing this one. Or start a new chain. Deadline is 8/15/2024 Rules below.

By Lamar WigginsPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The rain.
Photo by michael podger on Unsplash

Precipitation—

Humble clouds spread tears of joy

Their love, absolute

~

eyes glued to rainfall,

not a care in the world, I

resound with nature

By NOAA on Unsplash

Haikunature poetry

About the Creator

Lamar Wiggins

Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.

"Life is Love Experienced" -LW

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶about a year ago

    I love this poem… & also the rain… unlike many others 🙃

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fabulous nature poem!!! Love it!!!♥♥♥

  • JulieLakeabout a year ago

    nice work!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Amazing snd lovely description embodied within your haikuplet.

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    Gorgeous work!!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    It's a good one, I missed this challenge. Haikius are hard!

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Beautiful descriptive imagery, Lamar! You can really feel this one as a reader

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Ooh, resound with nature. I am reading this with my door open on the first rainfall we have had in a good few weeks and FEELING it.

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    I may be tempted chaining to this piece of splendid writing Lamar! If I can get my head around the rules - seem to have trouble sticking them for some reason lol. In other news, just a slight nudge - you get a reference here - https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/magister-operis-epici-ode-ad-creatores-vocales%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">

  • Oh wow, that was absolutely beautiful! I loved it!

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    Haikuplet .. another new poetic concept for me to struggle with. It helps that you have demonstrated how it should be done so beautifully.

  • sleepy draftsabout a year ago

    Beautifully done!

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Nice!

  • Kenny Pennabout a year ago

    Lamar this one is awesome!! There’s just something about a rainstorm that puts me at ease

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Nicely done!

  • Matthew J. Frommabout a year ago

    alright alright you got me....

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