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Frozen Serenity

6W6Lextreme Poem

By Mother CombsPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Image by Alex Prykhodko from Pixabay

Taking a drive through majestic beauty

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Winding up a salted blacktopped road

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Enjoying the view of a wonderland

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Sunshine reflected off of fresh snow

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Blanketed evergreen needles peeking through gaps

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A trip to a warm haven

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To heed the call of Peace

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Serenity visited during a calm stillness

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The place where mountains reign supreme

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Awestruck, I worship at its altar

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Absorbing the energy of a million years

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Steering through this fantastic frozen sanctuary

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • T. Lichtabout a year ago

    so beautiful, love the way it's written!

  • Sean A.about a year ago

    Beautiful imagery. Felt like a wellspring of peace

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    ☺️ Lovely. I must try this as I often get writer’s block. Will write this structure on my fridge to practise.

  • Daphsamabout a year ago

    Oh, brillant!

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Love it!! Great photo!😊💗💕

  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    The view is stunning, the poem divine, what is this 6w6L, i have seen it before, something aboot Dhar or something.

  • Whoaaaa, this was absolutely stunning! I freaking loved it!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    I feel chilly reading that!

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Frost can bring peace. Beautiful, Sharon.

  • Testabout a year ago

    I love your poem, inspiring and peaceful

  • Komalabout a year ago

    Such a chill vibe! Feels like cruising through a winter wonderland—peaceful, breathtaking, and full of mountain magic. Nice escape into serenity! 💕

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    I loved that line - salted black tip road. Could literally see it.

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    Stunning piece, Combs! 💌

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Brilliantly written and so inspirational!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Joe Pattersonabout a year ago

    Beautifully written.

  • sleepy draftsabout a year ago

    This is stunning. Every one of my senses feels engaged while reading this! It has such a beautiful effect.

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