Experiences of You
A love fifty
You laughed
and the sound
filled my s-o-u-l
You looked
at me, and
my breath c-a-u-g-h-t
You loved
and I felt
my chest w-a-r-m
You cried
and my hands
wiped your t-e-a-r-s
You walked
and I heard
my heart b-r-e-a-k
You moved
on and I
died a l-i-t-t-l-e
without you
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The Invisible Writer
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Aww 💔. Excellent poem. Congratulations on your win.
Oh 💔
Up and down of emotions - Beautifully Done!!!
Well done! You capture attachment and heartbreak beautifully in this 🥹
So beautiful with some heartbreak - congratulations, Will! :)
Heartbreakingly reflective - a stellar love poem. Congratulations! :)
Congratulations on your well deserved placing in the challenge ✅… a beautifully emotive poem. Cute image too 🤗.
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Oh, my heart - this is piercing. The absence of love highlights the fullness it brings when present. Congratulations, Invisi! This is a beautiful and poignant poem on love.
Fantastic!!! Congratulations on the runner up win!!!❤️❤️💕
So sad. Congrats.
Congratulations!
Yay Will!!!! I'm back to say congrats on runner-up in the Love in 50 challenge!!
What a great way to add tactile sensation to your words! Congrats for being featured in Vocal "Creators We're Loving" today!
Lovely poets but very sad moment and best writing your words
Beautifully written. It explains how you fell in love and how your heart broke, all in fifty words. Well Done invisible!!
Oh this explains heartbreak so beautifully…. This was so damn good.
That was so sad. So poignantly beautiful!
Oh my, that last line. Beautiful writing. Well done.
Which is why the little boy in "Love Actually", after telling his stepfather that he's in love & being told that's great, responds, "Why would you say that? It's awful!" That's pretty much been my experience, too.
Will, this is just soul crushing and so relatable!! Beautifully done!!
Oof, that one hits deep. The spacing makes each moment linger, like echoes of love and loss. Simple, but powerful. Feels like a whole relationship in just a handful of lines.
Such a rollercoaster of emotions this piece brings forth. well written
You sure know how to lay back flesh to bare a heart and soul. Beautiful poem