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Death’s diabolical dance

Tattoo This Line Challenge

By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶Published 9 months ago 1 min read
Death’s diabolical dance
Photo by Marcel Scholte on Unsplash

Sit!

Sit your

Sorry Self down…

Stunned!

Speechless!

Shocked!

White noise weaves

words weirdly warp

dark splotches devour

colour, clarity fades.

Walls spin sickeningly

‘Show-ride’ style.

Up!

Drag

your limp

mind, body and soul up

Up off the frigid, unforgiving floor.

Grasp the outstretched hand.

Breathe!

In out in out in out…

Slowly

Calmly

Deliberately

Breathe!

Absorb

the brutal blow

Defy Death’s diabolical dance!

Light Life’s waiting wick!

Fight! for family, for friends

Embrace every miraculous moment.

Rend

Cancer’s sullen shroud

Vanquish Cancer’s insidious cells.

Irradiate!

Exterminate!

Obliterate!

Delete Cancer’s ‘Life Sentence’

Savour Life’s sweet song upon your lips

Banish Malignancy to Ancient History

Pursue Vitality doggedly

Always give thanks… for the Good… and the Bad.

For Life!

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Author note: I envisage a tattoo ‘postscript’ to the tiny dots tattooed on the breast, guiding accurate delivery of radiation therapy for breast cancer.

Written for Tattoo this Line Challenge.

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About the Creator

Angie the Archivist 📚🪶

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  • D.K. Shepard8 months ago

    Really well done, Angie! Such a powerful piece. Loved how you used alliteration in such a striking way, made each line really stand out. And love the thoughtfulness in where the tattoo would be and what purpose it would serve!

  • Tiffany Gordon8 months ago

    Stunning work Angie! 💪🏾🌸

  • Calvin London8 months ago

    Well done, Angie

  • Oh wow, this was so freaking powerful, Angie! You nailed this!

  • Caroline Craven8 months ago

    Gosh Angie - this was amazing. Cancer is the absolute worst. This had such a positive tone to it. Well done and good luck in the challenge.

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