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Darken The Lightness

Ode to an eclipse

By Joe PattersonPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Darken The Lightness
Photo by Jongsun Lee on Unsplash

Every now and then the sun shines

Correctly bright. Sometimes too bright

Leaving too much light. When it does I

Instantly need it to be dark, so dark a

Purgatory of shade never apart. I’m

Seeking shadows where darkness only

Extends. I hope the unlit never ends.

Odenature poetry

About the Creator

Joe Patterson

Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.

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  • Joe O’Connor2 years ago

    I like how this sees an eclipse as a positive event, rather than the usual harbinger of doom we see in a lot of other entries. "so dark a Purgatory of shade never apart."- stuck out to me. Great use of caesura too Joe!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Nicely done, Joe.

  • Gerard DiLeo2 years ago

    So introspective. All about the speaker, not the sun!

  • This was really good

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Awesome!!!💕❤️❤️

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