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Ice King/Winter King/ Simon Petrikov (Adventure Time)

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - September 2023
“Winter-Wonderland” song from Fionna & Cake

Yanked from the precipice of natural sanity

A voice stricken with gusto, there is no safety

Souls being split with agony

Simon Petrikov, thankless and in feverish turmoil

Cannot dream of betterment

A good life drowned in frozen stasis, with his heart stolen

By a wretched sort of madness

There is no way to project the insanity

Unless you harm others, especially yourself

Wearing a poisoned crown,

Alternative names stricken and rewritten

Ice King & Winter King

All names that mean the same

With different choices, all lunacy

Crowns can reek of sparkling veneers

But hide away the tyranny and lust for power

Layers that greed cannot melt away,

Even with the most beautiful and purest form of love

Simon Petrikov

Misses his sweet Betty dearly,

His tears frozen in a petrified stasis

Growing old with a fresh face,

The crown growing heavier with each year.

Simon & Betty

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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Outstanding

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • Test2 years ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Bren2 years ago

    I haven't seen this since this show since my kids were kids! Well done!

  • Gerald Holmes2 years ago

    What a great use of language! This is very well done. Congrats on the Top Story.

  • Helen Seder2 years ago

    Oh my gosh I so enjoyed this! As a huge AT fan, my heart always breaks for Simon.

  • Wonderful words my sister, I don't read enough of your work, but when I do I know I have found something very special. Brilliant

  • Very good

  • I haven’t watched Adventure Time in a while, but this poem took me right back to the Ice King’s story and is just as powerful. Congrats on the Top Story!

  • YES.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Excellent!!! And congrats!!!

  • Jazzy 2 years ago

    Congrats on top story!! 🔥

  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    Beautiful work! Congrats on your Top Story!

  • Sweet-❤️😉💯✌️Congratulations on Your Top Story🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    I'm not sure who Simon is, but this is really well written. Congrats on the TS

  • JBaz2 years ago

    I have to admit, I had no idea what I was reading and still I was fascinated by the way you. Wrote it. Also now I know Congratulations

  • A good life drowned in frozen stasis, with his heart stolen By a wretched sort of madness There is no way to project the insanity Unless you harm others, especially yourself Wearing a poisoned crown These lines are my favourite as it resonated so deeply with me! Loved your poem so much!

  • Linda Rivenbark2 years ago

    Very touching poem that speaks to the reality of life that cannot even hide behind a royal crown. Great work!

  • Sean Patrick2 years ago

    This is terrific. Great piece.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Wonderful!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • I had not heard of Simon Petrikov or "Adventure Time". Thanks for the introduction.

  • Love this! Is the video a part of adventure time?

  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    Great poem. Love it

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