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chocolat [ masculine ] a bar of chocolate une barre chocolatée.

To you, my darling Choclate radiant Eyes

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
chocolat [ masculine ] a bar of chocolate une barre chocolatée.
Photo by Kelly Brito on Unsplash

i found you by the wasteland,

Near the Joshua trees in the sea of desert,

The simmering sun melting my heart with the waves of glass-hot sand

Your long black gams and toes tapping out an alien alert,

I hiked up my skirt

You pretended not to see but I had a dream about chocolat, and I had some for you,

You have become the deepest part of my brain… a desire covert

So I melted the rich chocolate in a glass with cream, and with lips so blue

You took a sip, very sweet and curt

The cacti felt sweeter when you ripped it apart and we drank it’s life-water, to quench your breathless hue

Darling Chocolate Radiant Eyes, why did you drop in just to haunt me, forever first?

You, the dark blue moon alien from my dreams, now you escape in the heavens to eschew, bless you!

The chocolate rain we had, did It scare you away with an alien thirst?

Now I long for to reunite,

in a starless night,

The Milky Way like our candy bar

And you are

My only radiant star.

love poems

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Oh this was sexy, sweet, and dreamy! Plus I love chocolate, so you had me there from the title :) Loved this one from you, Melissa!

  • 🕊️✨ beautiful, Melissa

  • Darkos2 years ago

    Woaw beautifully amazing! Love how You wrote it!

  • "We only separate to rejoice in uniting." Noice!

  • EYHCS2 years ago

    Beautiful and tantalizing. Nice.

  • This was so sweet and lovely! Such a wonderful poem!

  • This is beautifully sensuous, almost decadent yet with the most innocent & pure of longings & hope.

  • Atomic Historian2 years ago

    Excellent word play!

  • 🍫😍😋Excellently Written piece 📝👍🌈

  • Great poem! I love Milky Way!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Awesome!!! Love your line, "The Milky Way like our candy bar." Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕

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