Blue Jay
Vision Board Poems: Freedom

My skin absorbs the sun's warmth like the asphalt in front of us.
Wind rushes in my ears, carrying with her echoes of boundless laughter.
I smell the world in the air, the earth, the heat...
nearby sweetgrass lingers on my tongue.
Above me, blue jays dance in an open and endless afternoon sky.
pack yourself a toothbrush dear
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sleepy drafts
a sleepy writer named em :)
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Comments (23)
This poem. How to describe it? Nothing but crazy good works. Loved the imagery
Congratulations on your top story πππ
Lovely collection
Beautiful and airy!
Congrats on the Top Story! This is such a spectacular poem. I can feel the warmth of summer (and now I miss it lol). Beautifully written!
Superb gratitude poem!!! Love it!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!
Congratulations on your top story, Sleepy Drafts. I will definitely read more of these, so thanks for sharing the links. Poetry is my first love of writing so this is a treat for me.
Congratulations on top story . Keep up the good work. Super proud. !!!!!
Well written, congrats
So full of positivity and love for life! I really enjoyed this. Congrats for top story!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ππππππ
Love that you still have more of these up your sleeve! They're such enjoyable reads!
Love the image of wind carrying laughter. Well written! Iβll keep my ears open for joy in the breeze
Back to say congrats on the Top Story! π
'Sup Em ~ We have a drop-top roadster and the pic is the Joyous Spittin' Image of 'The Wife' as we cruised the coast..! - Thanks for the lovely memory - j.in.l.a.
Ahh, beautiful! Beautiful photo, beautiful piece! Love it! ππ
Yayyyy, let's run away and go off grid hehehe. Loved your poem!
Open and endless afternoon sky - what a line! Makes me long for spring and summer!
I smell the world..., oops, I guess not after two sinus surgeries. I hear the wind..., oops, no, that's just my tinnitus acting up. I see the blue jays up above..., but only if I'm wearing my trifocals & have them positioned correctly. But that doesn't mean I don't love this poem, Sleepy, 'cause I do! I also love Banff, Alberta. Lake Louise has the bluest water I've ever seen. My brothers & I were told that there was a trail that went all the way around to the other side of the lake, so we decided to hike it. They didn't tell us that it went only to the right & didn't circle all the way around. We went to the left & hiked cross country until we met the trail on the other side. Then we decided to continue on to the glacier where the bright blue area where it was melting looked to be about 8-10 feet high. Turned out it was at least three stories. On the way we saw both bear & wolf tracks that were fairly fresh. By the time we got to the glacier the sun was already behind the mountains & it was getting dark. So we ran all the way back to the chalet parking lot. Banff is also where we learned that you can sunburn your eyeballs if you go skiing for an entire day without sunglasses. That was two weeks of misery for the four of us, lol.
Love the sensory details of this one, Em!
Gorgeous & inspiring! Go Em! π
So free and joyous. Love it β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
This is such a lovely one. <3 You're visual boards are always gorgeous This form is similar to the 6-word poem (my 6w6Lextreme).