A Forest Shower
A Second Example For My Forthcoming "Showers And Fools" Challenge. This is Just A Shower Villanelle Inspired By An Unexpected Nightcafe Creation
Introduction
This is a villanelle example for the forthcoming "Showers And Fools" Challenge that has been inspired by the image above. I really liked it, but it wasn't right for the story I was writing. To me, it cries out for a story of the joy of experiencing showers and rain in a beautiful forest.
A Forest Shower
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Let Us Feel The Sweet Rain On Our Bodies
We Can Take A Path Under The Tall Trees
A Lovely Shower In The Green Forest
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Come, Let Us Dance Like The Woodland Fairies
Enjoy These Tranquil Moments In The Green
Let Us Feel The Sweet Rain On Our Bodies
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Under This Leafy Verdant Canopy
Those Cleansing Drops Of Water We Can Feel
A Lovely Shower In The Green Forest
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The Rain Cascades From Clouds In The Sky
To Shower Us, And To Wash Us So Clean
Let Us Feel The Sweet Rain On Our Bodies
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To Be Unhappy Here Would Be Folly
So Come On, Let Us Do It, You And Me
A Lovely Shower In The Green Forest
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Shower In Nature Soothing Us Gently
Out Of Doors, We're Sheltered By These Green Trees
Let Us Feel The Sweet Rain On Our Bodies
A Lovely Shower In The Green Forest
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About the Creator
Mike Singleton π Mikeydred
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Comments (16)
AI art can surprise you sometimes...good and bad. Art fits life.
Nicely done Mike!
It's hard to find anything I like more than the sound of a good rainfall. I may have to leave this playing for the entire 10 hours, then start it again.
Oh so soothing and beautiful! Thanks for sharing π
Thank you so much for the comments, really appreciated
Like gentle rain... β‘πβ‘
That sure does sound like a fun and joyful time. Loved your beautiful poem!
Good job, Mike, and your words echo the visuals in he image.
Beautiful poetry and lovely photos, too!πππ
Just wonderful. Nicely penned.
Such a beautifully calming piece. Made me wish I was outside in a gentle rain. <3
Loved this!
Calming and soothing and just plain beautiful, Mike.
It's a celebration of both natureβs simplicity and its deep, healing power. Nice work Mike.
Love everything about forests, had to click when I read the title but didn't expect finding something so soothing.
Beautiful - nicely done.