Facing Milton
Waiting for a Category 5 hurricane to make landfall
We did everything right.
Or so we thought.
We worked hard for decades, saved for our retirement, left behind the blizzards of the northeast, and bought a beautiful property in Florida.
"Central Florida is the safest place to be," our realtor assured us. "You don't need to worry about strong storms here."
"Hurricanes aren't a problem in this area. It's the coast you have to worry about."
"But just to be extra cautious, these homes are built to withstand a Category 3 hurricane."
We felt confident we made the right choice when we bought our new home.
In many ways, Florida surprised us. We had never really considered moving here. We loved the four seasons of the East Coast and New England. The first snow of the year always astonished us with its quiet transformation of our surroundings. We miss our annual drives in October through the yellow and red autumn hills of New York, Massachusetts, and Vermont.
However, several fortuitous events, including lifelong friends moving here, led us to a lakeside community outside Orlando.
Part of a new development near Lake Apopka, with lakeside walking trails, lush gardens, wildlife, and birds of all kinds—herons, storks, and every color of ibis you can imagine—this area has proved to be a special place to live.
We even have a nesting pair of bald eagles across the street from our house.
The weather is perfect. A few hot summer months, and then heaven comes. Nine months of blue skies, gentle rains, and sunshine, sunshine, sunshine.
It is the Sunshine State, after all.
We have grown to love the Florida landscape, which has that special look of the American South: tall, lean pine trees, majestic oaks laden with Spanish moss, flowers all year long, and colorful songbirds that migrate from as far away as Canada and Argentina.
We enjoy our new neighbors who are from places as diverse as Alaska, Michigan, Cuba, Puerto Rico, and Haiti. We've made good new friends here and feel proud to open our home when family and old friends from New York and California visit.
Life is good. We are grateful. We know we are fortunate. And blessed beyond measure.
We count our blessings every day.
We also grieve when we see the destruction caused by storms and fires on the news almost weekly. We worry about the fierceness of climate-caused weather patterns.
We do our part to help with solar panels and an all-electric car.
Then, this week, we hear news we never imagined:
A Category 5 hurricane is coming right at us.
It will make landfall very soon.
Hurricane Milton will likely be the most destructive and dangerous hurricane to hit Central Florida in more than 100 years.
(To add to the astonishing and grim news: Milton follows just one week after Helene left devastation from Florida north through the Carolinas and beyond.)
What's going on?
Can this really be happening?
This morning The New York Times called Milton a "Monster Storm".
Will our home be able to withstand the hurricane?
Category 5 seems unthinkable.
We consider evacuation. We weigh all our options. We do our research once again.
It reminds us that no matter how much we plan, find out, make informed decisions, and do our best, life brings unforeseeable challenges.
It can even bring disaster.
Whatever we may enjoy today could be gone tomorrow.
We are small in the face of the powerful forces of nature.
Uncertainty is ever-present.
Watching the news this week has us worried. Both coasts are in danger of storm surges and flooding. Many neighborhoods, even inland, are under mandatory evacuation orders. Elderly residents who live in mobile homes are especially vulnerable. Downtown Orlando has some areas prone to flooding, as they were built long before the hurricane housing codes enforced since the 1990s.
Last night, comfortable on our couches watching the news, we bolted to upright sitting positions when the latest predictions foresee 2 to 3 feet of rain in 24 hours.
Have you ever heard of such a thing?
This morning, on what will be the last of our daily walks for some days, we share our worries with neighbors.
We've all considered evacuation.
We've all decided to stay and shelter in our homes.
And as good neighbors do, everyone offers help.
"Do you need anything?"
"Are you ready? Everything secured in the yard?"
"Can we pick up groceries for you?"
"We have extra bedrooms, and you're welcome to stay with us if anything happens..."
Good, kind, neighborly folk.
We reassure each other that somehow we'll get through this storm.
We'll keep in touch with text messages.
We'll check up on each other.
We'll weather this storm together.
This will be our last time to see each other for a while. We return to our house and continue preparing for the storm.
We bring in patio furniture, potted plants, and decorative solar lights.
We have a few hours left to complete the recommended safety measures. We fill pots with water, find the flashlights, and get out the first aid kit.
Is there anything else we need to do? Are we going to be safe in this house?
Then the doorbell rings.
A quiet and kind neighbor, a college professor from India, smiles shyly.
"I brought you avocados," he says, handing me a bag of seven gorgeous green fruit from his garden.
"Seven is a lucky number," I say.
He smiles.
"Stay safe," he says.
"You, too," I reply.
And we each take shelter in our homes, awaiting the storm.
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Post-Storm Note
This story was initially published in October the night Milton made landfall in Florida. At that time, we did not know what would happen.
Today, I am happy to report that we and our neighbors weathered the storm safely.
The damage outside, however, was dramatic: fallen trees, uprooted bushes, broken fences, blown-away stop signs, and a leveled shoreline along Lake Apopka. In many ways, the neighborhood was not recognizable for weeks.
Two months later, thanks to an extensive and organized statewide clean-up effort and Mother Nature's restorative use of time, the neighborhood is back to normal. The lakeshore is green again with willowy grasses and reeds. Songbirds have arrived from the north, and their morning chorus rivals a symphony.
Nature has restored the order and calm that she briefly and fiercely interrupted.
We enjoy the tranquility while it lasts.
We feel ready to face whatever storms may come.
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About the Creator
PK Colleran
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Comments (33)
Congratulations, PK, on your win and previous top story! New York resident, here, and I absolutely love our four seasons, but Florida has always been in the back of my mind as a place for retirement. Your community is nothing short of amazing and I am happy to hear that everyone faired the storm safely.
Congrats on your runner up spot! I'm glad you and your family and neighbors were all safe during another devastating Hurricane! My brother goes to school in Boone, NC and it was scary when Helene hit there too!
Congrats on the win in the Challenge! My brother was in Tampa General, dying as Helene was bearing down. He was "discharged" in a slight recovery, then shortly after died. Effin' hurricanes. Stay safe!! He moved there from IL when my parents did - I went north to Alaska. https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/a-walk-alone-in-falling-sunshine%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Congratulations on your Runner Up Win - Well Deserved!!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I’m glad you and your family are safe! It was heartbreaking watching the news, and admiring all who weathered it at the same time. Congrats and thanks so much for sharing!
Glad the lucky avocados spared you from the pits of post-Milton recovery! My dad is in Sarasota ... Im in DC...those 2 nights leading up to Milton, as the news predictions got worse, and evacuation options became impossible, were as worrisome as watching Anderson Cooper get blown out of his boots when Milton finally arrived :) Hope FL continues to grace you with blessings of luck and caring neighbors.
Congratulations on Top Story!!
Congratulations on your TS.
I'm glad you revisited this one to follow up and glad you safely weathered the storm. Nature certainly has a way of reminding us who's in charge. Living here in Tornado Alley, we get frequent reminders, though not on quite such a grand scale. Nevertheless, we see neighbors and entire comunities come together during those times, and it's always a blessing to watch the flora and fauna return. I'm very glad you and yours made it through MIlton, and congratulations on a well-deserved Top Story!
This was an interesting writing. I think I liked best how you structured it. It added emphasis and pulled attention to each separate sentence. I don't think it would have had quite the same impact had it been written in paragraph form. I hope the storm was weathered safely!
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great work
Bless you all
I enjoyed the crisp, tight, short sentences. Atmosphere and tension.
7 is a lucky number….. Not only is this a true story by my sister, Patricia, but she has a way to end things with a positive note. In the face of adversity, there is hope. Congratulations on top story for October 2024! Love you lots
Stay safe, and I hope everything turns out okay for you and your neighbors!
Blessings to you and your family. :)
I'm so happy that you made it through the storm. God bless you!
Oh my, what an experience - this is truly frightening but so wonderfully written <3 Sending you positive thoughts - I hope all is ok!! <3
Hope you and yours are safely ensconced following Milton's wrath. I learned back in 1989 (Charleston and Hurricane Hugo) that there is absolutely no rhyme or reason to the massive harm and destruction these storms can carry. It does seem now, however, that even living inland cannot save you from harm's path, as witnessed with Helene and North Carolina. Be safe wherever you may be.
Really hope you've made it through the storm safely. It's been a rough time for Florida. Fantastic writing. Wishing you all the best.
Hope you made it through the storm safely, I have family in the Tampa area but most of them evacuated. I love how your story highlights being good to each other.
Hope you are okay. But what a great story of solidarity in the face of strife.
I really appreciate this story.