Frighten Me! Please?
Unofficial October Challenge
"Take thy beak from out my heart, and take thy form from off my door!”
Quoth the Raven, “Nevermore.” - Edgar Allen Poe, The Raven
Haunted mansions, hungry monsters, and harrowing miscreants,
Acid blood spilling from alien creatures, causing agonized screams,
Lycanthropes baring fangs lathered in lustrous and poisoned slaver,
Lethal, lonely, lovely vampires lingering deep in lightless caverns,
Open mouths shrieking from oval faces painted in outward terror,
Witches brewing wicked potions to trap unwary and willful children,
Evil killers wielding sharp-edged knives or curved axes etched in blood,
Echos of eternal souls prowling endlessly in vast, empty asylums,
Never blinking, never sleeping, for the nightmares never slumber
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It’s official, y’all: We’ve finally made it to the fall! Peace out, Summer!✌🏼The sweltering months are behind us, and the cool breezes have arrived, along with colorful leaves, pumpkin-spiced lattes, and the best holiday of the year, Halloween! We’re going to celebrate by kicking off a new - and hopefully creepy - unofficial challenge.
One of my favorite fall activities is stretching out on my recliner, sipping on a nice hot coffee, and reading a good horror. This year, I want to read yours. Give me your scariest, most mind-numbing stories. Traumatize me! 😂 I don’t care whether they’re supernatural monster tales or terrifying slashers. Give me a gothic tale with vengeful ghosts, take me camping with ravenous werewolves, or show me your version of a bloodthirsty axe murderer. The choice is yours, but please, no sparkling vampires.
“Come on back, and we’ll see if you remember the simplest thing of all – how it is to be children, secure in belief and thus afraid of the dark.” - Stephen King, IT.
The challenge: Write an original horror story that is between 600 and 1000 words between now and October 31st.
The prizes are $30 for first place and $20 for second place. The winners will also receive a special shout-out on my Substack blog.
The rules:
- Each entry must be between 600 and 1000 words
- Entries must leave a comment below linking their published story, and each entry must link back to this original post.
- Entries must be from new stories written in October this year and originally written for Vocal Media. You can certainly submit a story you’ve already submitted to another vocal challenge (double-dipping, anyone?) as long as they were written in October this year.
- Stories will be scored by giving up to 20 points in each of five different categories: Originality, Fear factor, Descriptiveness, Length, and, of course, my personal enjoyment. If you stay within the minimum and maximum word limits, you get an easy 20, but I'll take off 5 points for every 5 words outside the limit (that's up to 20 words).
- In the case of any ties, I will award 5 bonus points one time to any story in a tiebreaker scenario that includes an Easter Egg from a horror novel or movie I recognize (Hint: I loooooove Stephen King). If there is still a tie after that, then each author will receive the maximum prize for their placement.
This isn't an official rule, but please be supportive and read a couple of the other stories in this unofficial challenge and be sure to leave a comment. The main purpose of this challenge (other than gratifying my love of darker stories) is to foster community development amongst each other and provide the encouragement and support we writers surely need.
“No tears, please. It’s a waste of good suffering.” - Clive Barker, The Hellbound Heart
Need some motivation? Check out this eerie Halloween music:
Happy writing and happy Halloween!
About the Creator
Kenny Penn
Thanks for reading! I enjoy writing in various genres, my favorites being horror/thriller and dark/epic fantasies. I'll also occasionally drop a poem or two.
More at: www.kennypenn.com
My Top Stories: https://www.kennypenn.com/vocalmedia/




Comments (47)
Kennhy here is an entry, I failed miserably twice already , one was way to long the other my said it was good but not a horror story. So I wrote this, but I so have a horror one I hope to finish on time: https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/close-your-eyes-nz94b04iw%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
Alright we gave it a shot 🎃😁 https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/acheron-point%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here mine! https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/the-shadow-doctor%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
A little rushed, but here's mine! https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/sleepwalk%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
So. After screwing the pooch when it came to word count with a different story I wrote and published (linked in this one) this is my entry for your awesome challenge. https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/contractual-retribution%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
and here you go sir: https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/the-interview-effbi0ecw%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E left you 1 Easter egg.
https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/things-have-changed-a-lot-since-you-left%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E... Done and dusted!!
Hi Kenny! Here's my entry, in which you are literally terrified 😈 https://shopping-feedback.today/stories/kenny-meets-the-neighbors%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Hi Kenny - wrote another horror story and first too late saw the word limit of 1000, hmm.. mine is 1300 something, so I haven´t submitted it, but you can get a goosebomb if you like, find it at my profile "The House that took a chance".
Annnnd here it is! https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/specimen-feiom08ui%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I would like you to know, I was struggling to come up with something for this...finally get the brain wave the morning before the writing battle deadline...
Here is my entry: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/the-literary-agent%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E.%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This is a great challenge! I also love Stephen King!! I'll see if I can come up with something.
Kenny I do not know how I missed this challenge. I love Halloween, Ill get right on it. Thanks for hosting this wierd and frightning story event.
So fun! Here is a double dip, I hope you like it https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/tea-for-two-qu2b7e0qu3%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Finally got one done: https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/the-game-po1410w7v%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I scrounged out one. Loved the horror of it all...😁 https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/a-halloween-birthday-treat%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I really enjoyed writing the first story, so I thought I'd give it another go! https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/hidden-objects%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Hello, Mr. Kenny Penn. This is my entry. However, I have not added a link to your challenge in my published story. Because I didn't have an address before. And there will probably be two parts to my story. Is that valid? If I do not fulfill your conditions, then my pardon. I still want in; you it once? Here:- https://shopping-feedback.today/chapters/the-curse-of-wolfenstien%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
If nothing else, it will be good practice. thinking cap is on.
There you are, my dark and foggy icecold horror fiction: https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/the-midnight-summons%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I checked, and it doesn't look like I'm not allowed to go twice: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/crowley-s-end%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here's my entry! https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/lost-to-the-tempest%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here's my entry! https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/soul-stealers%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here you go! https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/imposter-x56fk05ke%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">