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The Game

For Kenny Pen's Frighten Me! Please? Challenge

By Dana CrandellPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 3 min read
Top Story - October 2024
The Game
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My head throbs. As my senses begin to return, I realize I'm intensely cold - and I smell something burning. Not wood; more like – yes, like meat. A shudder overtakes me and I realize I'm naked, and somehow suspended, hanging by bound wrists, but my feet are flat on something. What the fuck?

“Hello? I can't see! Is anyone there?” I hear muffled laughter, but it might be my imagination. So groggy...

I'm surrounded by glaring, white light, with no way to shield my eyes. And my feet are burning! The searing pain hits me and I realize that's where the smell is coming from.

“There we go! The sedative's wearing off now, isn't it?”

I know that voice. Who is it? Oh, shit!

The memory comes rushing like a flood. That stupid, damn parlor game! But he'd added his own twist!

“Aaah, I can see it's coming back to you, now! Just a second – we can't have you passing out, now can we?”

A motor whines and my shoulders scream as my feet are lifted off whatever floor is beneath me. The burning abates somewhat, but the smell is sickeningly more intense. My stomach heaves and I thrash helplessly for a moment, but the pain is too great.

“What the hell are you doing, Harold?”

“Take it easy, old pal. You're going to dislocate something. And you know exactly what I'm doing. You dreamed it up yourself.”

It's the truth. Harold had hosted a small, Halloween dinner party and after dessert, we'd played his sick, but seemingly harmless game. Instead of drawing cards, each of us wrote down “the worst way to die.” I'm experiencing exactly what I'd described.

“You have no idea how much trouble and expense I've gone to here. I think a little appreciation is in order. You've been out for about a week, though. It'll come to you soon.”

“Harold, please! I have money!”

Harold replies, thoughtfully, “Why is it that so many people think all the answers are in their wallet?”

I hear a loud sob. Jenny!

Harold's voice again, laughing, “Come to think of it honey, I don't think he has his on him at the moment, do you?”

Jenny's voice comes, pleading, “Please, Harold!”

“Oh, honey, no, this is exactly the way it's supposed to be! We played the game, and he won! 'Lowered slowly into a pool of acid.' It's absolutely brilliant. This is his prize! You came in second, so you get to watch! Rather fitting, don't you think, since the two of you have been cheating for months?”

I'm croaking now, as the fumes eat at my throat. “Don't look, Jenny! Close your eyes!”

“Oh, she can't, buddy! Her eyelids are taped open. I thought about removing them, like in that movie, you know? She's much too beautiful, though. I'm going to keep her whole and healthy, and if she misbehaves, or lets anyone know what happened here, there's something much worse in store for her. That's probably hard for you to imagine right now, huh?”

I look down as the winch motor overhead begins to purr, to find that the glass tank below me is full and I am, indeed, moving slowly downward. Instinctively, I draw my knees upward, toward my chest, which brings a fit of maniacal laughter from my “friend.”

“Jeez, buddy, I dunno if I'd choose that position. I mean, do you really want to feel that go first? I mean, it works for me... What do you think, dear? I have to admit, I can see what you saw in him, now.”

“You sick son of a bitch!” My last words should have been something more profound.

“Yeah, pal. My mom really was, but I'm not sure how you know that. Here it goes, honey!”

My senses are fully awake, and all I know is the burning. My voice is gone, but in my mind, the last thing I hear is the echo of my screams.

***

Just a little something for Kenny Penn's unofficial, creepy Halloween challenge, linked below. I very loosely borrowed a theme from and old Vincent Price movie, although many of you may not remember it.

Thanks for the fun idea, Kenny!

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Dana Crandell

Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.

Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist

My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity

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  • Kenny Pennabout a year ago

    Ohhhh man, what a way to go! Guess he shouldn’t have been sleeping with his buddy’s partner!

  • Uzman Aliabout a year ago

    Good job!! Dana. What an ending. 👏

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Cheese and crackers, Dana!

  • Jason “Jay” Benskinabout a year ago

    Your characters felt real and relatable, and the way you wove the theme of fear into the concept of a game was both clever and chilling. I especially loved the unexpected ending—it left me thinking long after I finished reading. I'd love to hear about your inspiration for this story and any other projects you’re working on. Looking forward to reading more from you! Best, Jason

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Testabout a year ago

    This was absolutely horrifying Dana, sooo captivating and such a great read!! I do agree this is one of the worst ways to go!! Also, congrats on Top Story!!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    So realistically cruel & wrong in all the right ways! 🎃👏

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Very well done . I like every sick and twisted line in this story

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    You have definitely skipped your meds...look, it's paying off! Congrats on your top story

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Congrats on the TS, my friend.

  • Kristen Balyeatabout a year ago

    😳 Well now, that was way too well written, Dana. I don’t usually read horror, but I couldn’t stop. Now I have to go back and read your bottle rocket haiku to recover. 😂 Terrifying… a fantastically twisted piece! Congrats on the top, my friend! 😳🙌🏽✨💫😵

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    So intensely terrifying! Very compelling plot elements and fantastic writing! Harold is quite a piece of work

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought! A gruesome scene masterfully described!

  • Cheaters? Nahhhh, I think Harold is going too easy on them! Cheaters deserve wayyyy more torture than that, especially slow torture. But I love Harold all the same hehehehehe

  • Testabout a year ago

    well done

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    That was just pure unadulterated horror for me 🤯

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Great. I just lost 😂

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Holy hell, that was horrible. Excellent writing, my friend.

  • Gabriela Trofin-Tatárabout a year ago

    Wow what a horror piece ! My mouth gasping, my breath quickened… The plit is brilliant though. I don’t want to ever watch this as a movie 😳

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