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Tea For Two

To Spill The Tea

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - October 2024

There was only one rule: don’t open the door.”

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we felt the seal breaking

we heard you breathing at the door

we left a message stating

you shouldn’t go on, anymore

the note, scribbled in warm blood

still you refused to hesitate

with everything you’ve done

still moving on, you contemplate

we heard you jiggle at the handle

pushed your weight hard, with your hip

we whispered your name, Randal

tightened the devil’s burning grip

inside was sawdust on the floorboards

a mattress on the ground

a double shot of whiskey poured

with no-one else around

candles lit as shadows fall

flickered smoke spin webs of vague

a tea set on the table calls

answers for your last mistake

we warned you not to open

we knew you could not resist

we’ve been waiting for you, hoping

you hadn’t found your common sense

we know your every secret

collected here, kept in this space

you hoped we’d all forgotten

but we never forget a face

had you left the door unopened

we may have stayed here, out of sight

as it is now, you are groping

with your demons, full of fright

welcome home, boy, get yourself settled

don’t you worry, it’s all alright

the price, because you meddled

is the value of your life

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About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    profound!

  • This has got to be one of the best you've created: submit it to everyone, everywhere! 🙏 I bow to your poetic prowess!

  • Kenny Pennabout a year ago

    Fantastic, Kelli! Almost felt like the lyrics to a spooky Halloween song!

  • Gabriela Trofin-Tatárabout a year ago

    This gave me the creeps, Kelli! Super original entry, congrats for top story!

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    This is fabulous

  • JBazabout a year ago

    You did this in a poem...HOW in the H E Double hockey sticks. This is creative and a great read

  • Anweshaabout a year ago

    AMAZINGG!!!! HORROR !!

  • MT Poetryabout a year ago

    Really intense! Feels like stepping into a nightmare you can't escape from!

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Fantastic piece, outstanding. You totally earned top story. Congratulations!!!

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Fantastic piece! Congratulations! 💥👏✨

  • R. B. Boothabout a year ago

    YO! congrats on TS. You totally earned this one! What a unique entry. Great job.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Congrats on the TS.

  • Kristen Balyeatabout a year ago

    Wow, that was fantastic, Kelli! I love your take on this—there is some deep stuff to sift through here. Bravo! Congrats on the top!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Very creative poetic journey, great job!!💘👏

  • A. J. Schoenfeldabout a year ago

    That was perfectly creepy.

  • Carol Ann Townendabout a year ago

    That sounded like Spirits chanting. It's a clever poem, Kelli. I loved it.

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    I love the spooky tone of it.

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    A compelling and spooky narrative poem!

  • R. B. Boothabout a year ago

    Wow. I LOVED this. Great entry Kelli.

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Wicked pic, wickeder poem. Well done!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    That was really creepy, and I'm mesmerized by the pic. Well done.

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    You got to be careful before opening any door that is offered to you in living life. That image you chose is something else. Good work.

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