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What Really Happened In Hamelin?

The Horrible Truth

By Paul StewartPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 2 min read
What Really Happened In Hamelin?
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The town of Hamelin had a serious rat infestation. They were everywhere. Many blamed the poor for attracting the pests. While the poor blamed the rich who enjoyed the crapulence of a life of luxury.

These rats caused all kinds of mayhem for the poorest of Hamelin. They had to deal with rats in their food, rats in their baths and even rats in their beds. The rich weren’t interested though. “Let the bigger rats deal with the smaller rats” they would say dismissively with a cheerful chuckle.

Only when the rats started invading the elegant townhouses of the rich and lazy, did the oafs think about dealing with the ravenous beasts. Bait-laced with poison was laid, traps were set, but the rats managed to outsmart them. The townsfolk even tried shooting them, but actually killed more townsfolk than rats through misfired shots.

All seemed lost until the arrival one day of a fellow proclaiming himself to be the town’s rescuer. Dressed in a resplendent multicoloured outfit and cap, the man claimed, for a humble price, he could rid Hamelin of the rats. Just by playing his pipe.

Everyone laughed and thought he was drunk, mad or both. But he reiterated he could do it.

His humble fee was a home-cooked pie and some gold coins.

The next day, the townsfolk awoke to an astonishing sound. There was music in the air, as if it was part of the atmosphere.

As the townsfolk watched, the sound grew louder as the piper skipped and played his pipe through town, with an army of zombified rats marching behind him.

The pied piper led the rats out of the town and drowned them in a nearby river.

When he returned to collect his payment, the mayor refused to pay him. To say the piper was angry does not do justice to his boiling rage.

He left, gold-less and pie-less. We thought it was over.

Until we awoke to the sound of music again. The piper had returned playing his intoxicating melody through the town once more. This time the rats came back from their water burial and feasted on the townsfolk, gorging on flesh, while the piper ate pie.

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Thanks for reading!

Author's Notes: Had reverted this to Drafts when I was considering expanding it for the Legends Rewritten Challenge, but never did. So apologies for the republish. And another retelling of a fairytale for LC's wonderful challenge that I am enjoying a lot is my take on the events involving Hamelin. Another story that has always stuck with me. I had several ideas how to conclude this one, but went super dark and grissly in the end.

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Caroline Craven11 months ago

    Damn! You know, I prefer this ending. I was never comfortable with him whisking the kids away but the rats coming back to eat the people who didn’t pay up…. I’m okay with that!! Great story!!!

  • Nice story! and that's a great catchy title.

  • Carol Ann Townend11 months ago

    I love this. It's a brilliant rewriting, and the ending was interesting!

  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    always pay the piper

  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    This is quite a re-writing of that classic for sure, and did not expect the ending quite disgusting really. Good job.

  • Please, please, please tell me the pie was made the woman whose business was located beneath Sweeney Todd's barbershop.

  • D.K. Shepard11 months ago

    Ah snap! Zombie rats is such a clever and creative change up! Well done, Paul!

  • K. Kocheryan11 months ago

    I saw you posted five stories "about an hour ago" and I was about to demand your writing routine so I can copy it lol.

  • Katherine D. Graham11 months ago

    scary ending--important reminder to give what is due

  • I aspire to be that piper! I love how he ate the pie while the zombie rats ate the people 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • John Cox2 years ago

    You're on a roll today, Paul! Seriously funny recounting of what should have happened in Hamelin.

  • JBaz2 years ago

    Zombie rats You’ll never get rid of them now

  • Svilleg62 years ago

    like it ..

  • Natasha Collazo2 years ago

    Boy do I love rats! I also love your imagination

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