The Black Window
A Mystery

He woke and there was something wrong, well something had changed.
There was a window in the bedroom wall and outside the glass it was black. The wall was between the bedroom and the lounge in the apartment, so he thought, "What the hell is this?".
He could see that he could open it but wanted to see what was on the other side, so he got out of bed and pulled on his nightgown. It was early, and the heating hadn't come on yet.
Walking into the lounge there was nothing different, no window in the wall that had the bedroom on the other side.
Then he returned to the bedroom and looked at the window. There seemed to be something moving on the other side, but he didn't know where the other side was, or what it was. The shapes seemed to be faces, dark and anguished, like he was looking into a portal to Hell or Limbo.
He felt an incredible urge to open the window, but he knew that he shouldn't. He knew if he did he would let these tormented creatures into this world, or he would be pulled into theirs.
He felt a growing terror as he stood directly in front of the window, he would not open it, he would not give in.
Then there was a cracking sound and the window shattered. Black hands reached out, grabbed him and dragged him through the window.
He had been taken, he did not where.
The window faded from the bedroom wall.
When he didn't turn up for work, the police were contacted. Neighbours reported they had heard nothing.
His phone and wallet were still in the apartment but there was no sign of anything untoward.
He was gone and was listed as another missing person.
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Comments (7)
It’s very strange for the window to be placed there, I wonder what’s happening. Oh crap, I was so unprepared for those black hands and where he went after he had that urge. Neighbours are the worse set of people to ask for help, lol. They always never hear anything. But to be fair, he was probably taken so quickly that he didn’t make a sound. Oh I love this, the slow and careful weaving of this tale had me so unprepared for what was to come. I love the length, it too had me wanting more. 👏🏽👌🏽
Please tell those black hands to grab me too hehehehe. Loved your story!
I want to know where he is and why he was taken. Good job.
One more vote for a sequel! Well done.
A great set up, and would be a great mini challenge. You created a great tension and foreboding of WTF is going to happen.
Ok, this is really good. I need more too. Where does this window go? Will he ever return?
Wow! Does this have a sequel? I want to know where the guy was taken! I’m invested now! You MUST write a sequel! Please? Great work! ❄️🥸