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My New Stepmother

Thursday 7th November, Story #312/366

By L.C. SchäferPublished about a year ago Updated 9 months ago 3 min read
Top Story - November 2024
My New Stepmother
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First, I need to tell you what an absolute raging arsehole my stepmother was.

She has kids from a previous marriage. Bradleigh and Esmay can do no wrong.

Jonathan, Jessica, and I had a strict curfew, and equally strict rules around bedtime and lights-out. Her kids come home and go to bed whenever.

I couldn't get down from the dinner table without asking to be excused. She wouldn't excuse me until my plate was empty. I had to have a bit of everything. "There's no such thing as I Don't Like," she'd say. Even if it made me feel sick, I had to force it down. And she was a crap cook.

The same rules didn't apply to her darlings. She'd leave off foods they didn't like. They could get down whenever they wanted, and eat junk food after I'd gone to bed. We weren't allowed junk food.

She gave me so many chores, I never had chance to do homework. She didn't hit, but she'd yell, scream, throw things.

If I wanted something, she'd say No. She seemed to enjoy lording over me and blocking every bit of joy and relaxation from my life.

Two days ago, when I came home from school, a waft of fresh cookies hit me when I opened the door. That was weird. She didn't bake. Shop-bought snacks only. I sloped past her, hoping to avoid notice.

"Hey!" Her eyes widened. "Don't you want one?"

Really? Cookies before dinner?!

They did look good.

"Just one!" She winked. "Dinner soon!"

I took one, dazed.

"Any homework?" She lifted another cookie off the baking sheet with a spatula.

"Y-yes."

"I know it can be a bore," she said, in a sympathetic voice I'd never heard her use towards me, "But it is better to get it done straight away. Do you need any help? You can use the dining table, just make sure it's cleared by six."

Is she taking the piss?

At dinner, she scolded her own kids for getting down without asking.

"Uhhhh," Bradleigh stammered, "Can I be exc-"

"No," Her voice was sharp. "You can wait for everyone to finish. That's polite."

That's when I realised.

That's an alien.

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Word count: 366

(NB. This excludes the title, subtitle, and author's note.)

Submitted on Thursday 7th November

Quick Author's Note

A Year of Stories: I'm writing (and submitting, here) a story every day this year. This continues my 312 (!!!) daily micro-fiction story streak since 1st January.

ONLY FIFTY-FOUR DAYS TO GO!

Please consider lending your support to the other creators on this madcap "a story every day" adventure. They're putting out excellent content every day!

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Thank you to those who leave feedback/comments.

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  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    I hope all children get cookies before dinner

  • Jason “Jay” Benskinabout a year ago

    🎉 Congrats on getting Top Story—well deserved! 🌟 Keep up the amazing work! 💪✨

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    The ending sounds about right. congrats on the TS.

  • MD Robin24434about a year ago

    What a brilliantly written slice of life that nails the feeling of being stuck in an unjust family dynamic. The sharp contrast between how the protagonist is treated and how the stepmother’s biological kids are indulged is so effectively portrayed—it's frustrating and enraging, but you can also see how the protagonist’s perception begins to shift over time. The twist at the end where the protagonist realizes their stepmother might be "an alien" is wonderfully funny and unexpected, but it also hints at something darker and more surreal at play, which makes the whole piece really compelling. The story packs so much emotion into a short space—anger, confusion, and that creeping realization that maybe, just maybe, things are a lot stranger than they seem. Excellent job!

  • Henrik Hagelandabout a year ago

    Fascinating twist, I like the alien!!

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Excellent work! That's a amazingly written Congratulations on your top story ✨⛳

  • Marwa Jawadabout a year ago

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  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    A twist with a cookie before dinner! Awesome 👏

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fantastic storytelling!!! Love it!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!💕❤️❤️

  • D. J. Reddallabout a year ago

    The wicked stepmother is one of those tropes I have endless time for, and this is a clever and compelling treatment of it. Congratulations for the richly merited TS!

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Hey congrats! So glad this made top story.

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    Great story L.C. guess kids never know what to expect when they walk through the doo. Congrats on your Top Story!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Back to say congratulations on a well-deserved Top Story!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    I love, like really adore your sense of comedy as much as your astute social comedy! that last line was well worked for! congrats on another great Top Story!

  • Andy Pottsabout a year ago

    Not gonna lie, it was the first line that hooked me. Boom! And the rest lived up to that promise. Congrats on the TS.

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Either an alien, or a Jekyll and Hyde! Congrats on the TS, LC!

  • Testabout a year ago

    Oh wow. This is such a clever, well-written story, and I love the ending!

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    Great twist!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    An alien or a split personality for sure. The Two (or Three) Faces of My New Stepmother......

  • Interesting Story, LC. Now the question becomes what a child does when the "Alien" is a better parent

  • Katarzyna Popielabout a year ago

    Omg, I've met an alien like that one before! Are any visitors coming? If they do, beware of the time after the audience have left, the bad old self may be coming back!

  • Oh I thought maybe they had a visitor or something so she was putting on a show, lol

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Once again you made me laugh at the ending! Delightful twist, LC!

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Haha! That ending!!!! This was brill!

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