Just Go Back

Owen looks thirty, but he's lived many days many times over. Decades pressed thin and folded over.

He discovered his Talent accidentally. It's a knack, like snapping your fingers, only in more dimensions.

It makes him successful. He just keeps re-doing until it's perfect. Interview. Business deals. The lottery. Sex.

He's callous. Loss is meaningless.

He was a dorky kid, Before. Still nondescript-looking, but he's got his shit together. There's a depth to him, something about his eyes. Grandmothers say he's an old soul.

He's barely thinking of Heidi, waiting in a restaurant across town. He's busy flirting with another woman. Mira. His high school crush. I'll just go back, to when I hadn't...

Mira always rejected him, no matter how many times he re-wound.

Now, the prickly edge that warned close enough, loser has dissolved. She's complimenting him, brushing lint off his shirt. Gazing at his mouth, leaning close. Closer than the loud music demands.

He enjoys her perfume. Lips brushing his ear, boobs nudging. Her predictable tittering at his crap joke.

They tumble into her flat, playfulness evaporated. He hesitates. Do I want this to be rushed?

He shrugs it away with his shirt, gasping under her tongue. I'll just re-do...

Afterwards, without even wiping away her lipstick, he Steps smoothly through time and meets Heidi at the restaurant.

He returns to that moment, to Mira, the way others use their hand.

Next time, he takes his time.

The third time, he insults her, just to see her expression. He laughs, fucks her anyway. She's easy to pin. I'll just go back...

Another time, he puts his hand on her throat.

He loses count.

He squeezes her throat again. This time much harder, without stopping. I'll just go back...

He's returning her intense gaze. Her desire is hot and fresh, but he's bored of her. He smiles.

He plays the game, dances the steps... and in her flat, between kisses, says,

"There's something I... always wanted to tell..."

"What?" She hooks a leg round him.

"You need to get over yourself."

He fastens his buttons and walks calmly out of the flat, wrapping her shock around him. Heidi waits for him in the restaurant.

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Word count excluding note: 366

Submitted on Wednesday 14th August at 23:57

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