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Dork Drabbles #1
This is the start of a series of drabbles that come from a 'Dork diaries' volume that is primarily a diary for the reader to write for it's a book of questions that I am going to answer as an adult for some of these questions could be for us as well. January 8- If you could be any other person in the world for one week, who would it be and why? For me there is not just one person, but really a compilation of people from old teachers for they showed me how to think about various ideas.
By Mark Graham9 months ago in Critique
Old School
Jeff Kinney has written another in the series of the 'Diary of a Wimpy Kid' and this one is entitled 'Old School'. There is the usual cast of characters present from the mom and dad and his brother Roddrick and now his grandfather has moved in the house, and you will never guess where mom and dad put him. One cannot forget one other his best friend Rowley. The main idea of this story is that Greg has to figure a way to get out of going away to camp, but as you know with his luck things happen. This is a weeklong field trip for school that seems to be requirement for all.
By Mark Graham9 months ago in Critique
QPB
In starting a new project I wanted to know a little more about a certain series of novels. The series is 'The Lord of the Rings' and there is a thin companion guide to this series known as 'The QPB Companion to The Lord of the Rings'. This short academic reference book is divided into sections that talks about the author, the critics, and even the readers of the series.
By Mark Graham9 months ago in Critique
The Legend of Hanuman Season 6 (2025) Review: Honest Take You Need to Read
In no time, Season 6 of The Legend of Hanuman arrived and it arrived on the day of Hanuman Jayanti. So, on this occasion, let us review it for you and tell you whether you should give your time to this show or not.
By Ayush Verma9 months ago in Critique
Why is the iPhone so popular all over the world?
Year after year, Apple Inc., one of the most valuable tech companies in the world, maintains its dominance in the smartphone market. Apple iPhones continue to top customer wish lists despite the market's plethora of competitors, and with good reason. However, what precisely makes Apple phones so popular, and why do they frequently cause internet rushes and long lines with each new release?
By jakir hossain9 months ago in Critique
Russia ballistic missile strike kills dozens in Ukraine's Sumy, officials say
Officials claim that a ballistic missile strike by Russia kills dozens in Sumy, Ukraine. Sumy, Ukraine – April 13, 2025 A devastating Russian ballistic missile strike has killed dozens and left many more injured in the northern Ukrainian city of Sumy, Ukrainian officials said on Saturday. The attack, which took place early in the morning, is one of the deadliest incidents in recent months as the war between Russia and Ukraine drags into its third year.
By Nafij9 months ago in Critique
When Life Gives You Tangerines Netflix Review: Best K-drama to Watch This Month?
Hello, everyone. Hope you're all doing great. You feel even better after hearing about this amazing Netflix series that is going to grab your attention for sure. IU is my favorite, and this was the only strong reason I had to start watching this series, but I had no idea that it would turn out to be so mind-blowing.
By Ayush Verma9 months ago in Critique
U.S. and Iran see Saturday's nuclear talks as test of whether other side wants a deal
As of my latest knowledge update in June 2024, the United States and Iran are engaged in periodic talks over Iran's nuclear program, with both sides occasionally signaling cautious optimism but expressing frustration over perceived flexibility.
By MD Masud Hosen 9 months ago in Critique
Hyper Knife Kdrama Review: Why Park Eun-bin's Dark Medical Thriller Is a Must-Watch
So, guys, I have finally finished watching the Hyper Knife Kdrama, which was running on JioHotstar, and I must admit that no matter what role you give Park Eun-bin, she always shines. If you remember, she entertained us with her brilliant performance in Extraordinary Attorney Woo. And trust me you will enjoy watching his psycho in this Kdrama.
By Ayush Verma9 months ago in Critique
New York City – April 11, 2025
Thursday afternoon, tragedy struck over the Hudson River when a sightseeing helicopter carrying five tourists and a pilot sank near New York City, killing all six people on board. According to initial reports from the Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) and local authorities, the helicopter, operated by Liberty Air Tours, was on a routine aerial tour of New York City when it experienced a sudden mechanical failure. Around 3:20 p.m., witnesses reported that the aircraft began to spin out of control before collapsing into the river.Within minutes, emergency personnel from the Coast Guard, the NYPD, and the FDNY arrived at the scene. Divers recovered the bodies from the submerged wreckage shortly afterward. Officials confirmed that each of the six victims had passed away on the spot. New York City Mayor Rachel Whitmore expressed condolences to the families during a press briefing Thursday evening. She stated, "Our hearts go out to the families whose loved ones lost loved ones in this terrible accident." "We are collaborating closely with federal investigators to find out what went wrong and prevent this from happening again," The National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) has launched a full investigation into the crash. Officials emphasize that no conclusions have been reached, but preliminary analysis suggests a possible engine failure or rotor failure. The Eurocopter AS350 helicopter, which was commonly used for urban tour operations, was said to have passed its most recent inspection just two weeks ago. The victims have not yet been officially identified, but sources say they included tourists from three different countries, highlighting the international appeal of helicopter tours over New York’s iconic skyline.
By Md Sumon9 months ago in Critique
Helicopter Crash Highlights: Five Tourists and Pilot Killed When Helicopter Crashes Into Hudson River.
Within minutes, emergency personnel from the Coast Guard, the NYPD, and the FDNY arrived at the scene. Divers recovered the bodies from the submerged wreckage shortly afterward. Officials confirmed that each of the six victims had passed away on the spot. New York City Mayor Rachel Whitmore expressed condolences to the families during a press briefing Thursday evening. She stated, "Our hearts go out to the families whose loved ones lost loved ones in this terrible accident." "We are collaborating closely with federal investigators to find out what went wrong and prevent this from happening again," The National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) has launched a full investigation into the crash. Officials emphasize that no conclusions have been reached, but preliminary analysis suggests a possible engine failure or rotor failure. The Eurocopter AS350 helicopter, which was commonly used for urban tour operations, was said to have passed its most recent inspection just two weeks ago. The victims have not yet been officially identified, but sources say they included tourists from three different countries, highlighting the international appeal of helicopter tours over New York’s iconic skyline.
By Md Sumon9 months ago in Critique
Never Open That Door - Part I: Mrs Montgomery.
“Go on, get out, bitch, or I will give you more of that. Who needs you anyway?” Gabby sat in her car, sobbing. Deep sobs. Her world was falling apart. She had driven as fast as she could to get away from Luke. “How could he do this?” she asked herself. “Where was she going to go?”
By Calvin London9 months ago in Critique