Essay
A Family Nobody
Does anyone out ever feel like they are a family nobody? Actually, this is about me and that is how I feel 95% of the time since moving South. My sister moved me and my mom down here to help my mom, but underneath the reason was to try and get her first daughter's now ex-husband out of the house for he was lazy and not a really nice type of person some would say two-faced most of the time. It has now been 12 years since moving down here and my mom has gone to heaven and now, I am pretty much alone.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Birthday Parties
What is a birthday? Birthday parties is how we celebrate the day that someone was born, and I know that we all know that but does the person really want to celebrate that day or would just like to be remembered on the day of their birth. We all do not like being the center of attention and I am one of those that would like just to be remembered somehow. I do not want cake or presents, but maybe a special card would be nice though. I know that I am or was a teacher and they are the center of attention in a classroom but that really is not the same as someone singing Happy Birthday to you and you really know that they really do not want to be there.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Why Rich Kids Lack the Virtues of the Poor
Recently, I had a conversation with a colleague of mine. Upon conversation, the topic of our future arose. We pondered extensively on what we wanted to improve in ourselves. I wasn’t surprised by his quick response. He exclaimed that all he wanted was luxury (clothes, networking, mansions). Now, my colleague has always been a man of envy. Since we met, he has been throwing tantrums about all the sports cars and luxury brands he adores. On certain occasions, he would compare his clothes to mine. Whether it was for validation or a deep stem of insecurity is unknown. But, his overall persona is the pinnacle of consumerist ideology.
By CARLOS Alexander Guillenabout a year ago in Critique
Book reviewing
For the past few years, I have been a volunteer book reviewer for several online sites. Honestly, I was looking for a paid position to review books for say Publisher's Weekly and a few other companies, but they have never let me know one way or another. Being a book reviewer, one learns a lot and it does get lonely at times as does being a freelance writer but that does not bother me. Books are great company for me. Books are our friends.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Kingdom of Nepotism, Oligarchy, and Hidden Ambitions (KONOHA)
The Kingdom of Aethelred hummed with a discontent that vibrated beneath the surface of its forced merriment. King Edgar, a man of portly stature and even grander ego, sat upon his throne, a monument to excess in crimson velvet and ostentatious jewels. Around him, courtiers tittered and bowed, their smiles as thin as the fabric of their loyalty.
By Moharif Yulianto2 years ago in Critique
What Happens If an Astronaut Floats Off During a Spacewalk?
What Happens If an Astronaut Floats Off During a Spacewalk? Space exploration has always captured human imagination, and the image of an astronaut floating freely in the vast expanse of space is both mesmerizing and terrifying. The reality of spacewalks, officially known as Extravehicular Activities (EVAs), involves meticulous planning and stringent safety measures. However, the question remains: what happens if an astronaut floats off during a spacewalk?
By robail shahzadi2 years ago in Critique
Oligarchy: A Double-Edged Sword? Examining the Positives and Negatives
Oligarchy, a system of power concentrated in the hands of a privileged few, has existed throughout history. While often viewed with skepticism, it's not without its potential advantages. However, the negatives can be substantial. Let's delve into both sides of the oligarchic coin.
By Moharif Yulianto2 years ago in Critique







