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Exploring Alternatives to Cremation Diamonds: Transparency and Authenticity in Memorializing Loved Ones
Creating a lasting memorial for a loved one has taken a modern twist with the advent of lab diamonds made from ashes. This innovative idea promises a unique way to keep the departed close, encapsulating their essence in a gemstone. However, the Cremation Diamond Fraud Report 2020 by Global Claims Associates sheds light on a critical controversy that looms over this sentimental concept: the transparency and authenticity of the process.
By Sugarberry Memorials2 years ago in Critique
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When discussing vertical marriage, it involves God guiding and leading us. It's common for people to feel like their spouse isn't there for them in the way they desire. However, it's essential to acknowledge that God is always with you. By focusing on Him, you shift your perspective from seeking validation from your spouse to finding fulfillment in your relationship with God. Surrounding yourself with supportive friends who encourage you to seek God's will for your marriage is crucial. It's important to note that in situations of abuse or harm, seeking help and protection is necessary. Vertical marriage emphasizes finding true fulfillment in a relationship with Christ rather than relying on a spouse to meet all your needs. By understanding and experiencing God's grace, you can approach your marriage from a place of serving and loving your spouse, rather than seeking fulfillment from them. This shift in perspective leads to a transformation in the dynamics of the relationship, fostering a mutual exchange of love and service. Ultimately, vertical marriage encourages individuals to find their source of happiness and fulfillment in Jesus, allowing them to approach their marriage as givers rather than takers.
By Chung2 years ago in Critique
The break-up
Hi everyone - sharing a quick excerpt of the book I'm writing here. I would love to hear critiques, ways to improve, what you liked or enjoyed about my writing style - anything is helpful! Part of my book is written from one of my character's POV - first person. This is a reflection following the end of her relationship. Does it make you want to read more? What broke the flow? Let me know your thoughts!
By Emmy B2 years ago in Critique
Reading the Bible
Who's reading their Bible? I have read several books, but I am reading it from the beginning and now I am in First Kings. The Bible is one great book that teaches many things. Please share what you think.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Walking the Dog
Here is an acrostic poem that I want to share entitled 'Walking the Dog'. Wondering around looking for a spot. allowing the owner chances to rest.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Celebrating Excellence: The Prestige of the Oscars
The Academy Awards, often known as the Oscars, are the pinnacle of honor and celebration in the film industry. Ever since its launch in 1929, the yearly ceremony has enthralled viewers all around the world by recognizing exceptional accomplishments in film across multiple categories. The Oscars represent more than just recognition of artistic excellence and commitment to the filmmaking trade; they also serve as a testament to these qualities, from the glitter and extravagance of the red carpet to the moving acceptance speeches.
By Vijay Kumar2 years ago in Critique
Let's bodysham others from now on because it's a help!!
n my opinion, bodyshaming is not a bad practice, but a straight up practice. It does not cause damage, but is a way to help obese people realize their condition, and be motivated to change. Appearance is not the only criterion to evaluate a person, but it is an important criterion, because it is related to a person's health, abilities, happiness and success. Many obese people have taken advantage of the idea that they are bodyshamed to justify their bad habits. They have created an excuse not to face the truth, not to take responsibility for themselves, and not to make the effort to improve. They have fallen into a vicious circle, and do not want to get out. They ruined their own lives, and blamed others. That is a wrong, dangerous and despicable attitude. If they really want to be respected, loved, encouraged, then they must start those things with themselves. They must face facts, overcome challenges, and take positive actions to lose weight, improve health, increase abilities, and achieve happiness and success. They must know that only they can help them, and only they can stop them. 😄
By Uyên Hoàng2 years ago in Critique
Dear Vocal pt. 2 (2024)
Hey there Vocal, you may not remember me. I first wrote this article. You don't necessarily have to read it. In summary I asked you guys to either make the following communities or make them tags: Asian dramas(k-drama, j-drama, c-drama etc), otakus(anime) and Sims lit(- stories made by simmers.)
By BBW2 years ago in Critique
Sarah Rising
'Sarah Rising' is a children's picture that shows and tells the story of Sarah and she learns about cultural diversity and social injustice in the South. Sarah is a little girl who learns by observing nature and what goes on around her. One day she finds out why she is treated differently from all the others for she is a girl that loves all humans and animals. Ty Chapman writes this story along with DeAnn Wiley who illustrated it. DeAnn's drawings visualizes Ty Chapman's words. 'Sarah Rising' is a good picture book that can be used in an elementary classroom all the way through college for book discussions in courses dealing with social studies , social diversity and justice for all. It asks the question 'Why can't we all just get along?'
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
It's Just a Bunnypalooza
Brenda Foatz and Peter Trimarco has created a children's picture book that is quite a different Easter story. 'It's Just a Bunnypalooza' is the story of a little girl by the name of Lizzy who had a talent she needed to find. Lizzy has many friends that are both human and animal. Brenda tells the story through her chosen words as Lizzy hunts for her special talent. Peter has drawn pictures that little readers will like that tells the story and show how the various words that Lizzy speaks shows feeling. This is also a good book that parents will read and enjoy with their kids and some of the many lessons that we all need to learn at various moments of our lives.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
The Armed Forces and American Social Change and Unwritten Truce
Troy Mosley has written a very illuminating book entitled 'The Armed Forces and American Social Change An Unwanted Truce'. He has written a very illuminating piece of learning and history. It is a book that covers military history and society as part of a certain community of people. Troy has written a well-detailed reference book that teaches the readers how our country accepts various people and cultures throughout the years. This would make a good supplemental read for courses in Human services, History, and maybe even a counseling course.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Dark Obsessions A Kate Barnes Thriller
Who likes a mystery? Marie Sutro has written a murder mystery entitled 'Dark Obsessions' that is a Kate Barnes thriller. This mystery seems to carry on what the main character of Kate Barnes, who is a detective that needs to pull herself together from what happened on a previous case that has affected her in many ways. Kate also has some personal issues to work through and it seems that a trip to the Northwest United States could be the place where answers could be found in more ways than one.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique