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Walking the Dog

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By Mark GrahamPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Here is an acrostic poem that I want to share entitled 'Walking the Dog'.

Wondering around looking for a spot.

allowing the owner chances to rest.

looking around and seeing birds and squirrels.

kicking up dirt,

including some old poop,

noticing what's around to bark at.

guard dog not really.

taking master for a walk,

helping them exercise.

eliciting maybe a treat.

Doggone successful

only if

going poop or pee.

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About the Creator

Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Daphsam2 years ago

    Awwww, as a dog lover, I love your poem!

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