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Swinging
Back and forth you go higher and higher on living your life. (How would you describe swinging on a swing? I started out as if I was swinging as in line one 'back and forth' moving on to line two and as we get 'higher and higher' in all our various perspectives on how we are living our lives.) Please share your thoughts.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Do social media platforms offer a new way of connecting, or are they just narcissistic?
Social media platforms are unquestionably a modern track to connect and communicate with others in real time with a wide audience. Nonetheless, exactly like other tools, how they are used diverges from person to person. When individuals use platforms to promote themselves, trying to seek approval, or interacting with others sharing interests, it can lead to ambiguous or narcissistic behavior.
By Simone Nunziataabout a year ago in Critique
Doughnuts, again
A childhood treat that allows for many good times but tooth decay. (A just for fun haiku about sprinkle doughnuts and maybe even remembering all the various memories that these may bring about. During my childhood I really liked sprinkled doughnuts and milk. I had some good times when friends would come over, but after eating so many one may have to go to the dentist. Haha!)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
The Ultimate Hydration Companion: Owala FreeSip 24 oz Insulated Water Bottle
Hello, hydration enthusiasts! Today, we’re diving into a detailed review of the Owala FreeSip Insulated Stainless Steel Water Bottle. This 24 oz bottle in a sleek Blue/Teal (Denim) color promises to be your perfect companion for staying hydrated on the go. Let’s explore why this bottle stands out in a crowded market.
By Julien Eudes BGabout a year ago in Critique
Duramont Ergonomic Adjustable Chair. AI-Generated.
If you're in the market for a new office chair, the **Duramont Ergonomic Adjustable Office Chair** has likely caught your eye. This chair, available on Amazon, promises a range of features designed to enhance comfort and productivity during long hours at your desk. Let’s dive into what makes this chair stand out and see if it lives up to the hype.
By Bob Skylarabout a year ago in Critique
Libraries
Book upon books Circulation desk info knowledge abounds. (Who doesn't like or even loves going to a library. Line one, of course, all the books that one can and even desire. Line two the place where one learns where to get said desired book. Line three the knowledge that a reader receives from said books that was desired.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
doorways
open and close a way to come and go in and out of here. (Here is another haiku for doorways to our souls and lives. The first line is fine for they do work in this way. That brings us to the second line that seemed that way to go. The third line is what we do when we approach a doorway to here, there, and everywhere.) Comments are truly appreciated.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Sunday Morning
An open window a light from above for peace, love, joy. (Trying to describe a Sunday morning. The first line I originally started with 'A open window' but grammar check in its' way said no. The second line to me is right. The third line a reason for a Sunday morning is okay. Please comment and learning a lot.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
