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Doughnuts, again

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By Mark GrahamPublished about a year ago 1 min read
doughnut with sprinklers (pexels.com)

A childhood treat that

allows for many good times

but tooth decay.

(A just for fun haiku about sprinkle doughnuts and maybe even remembering all the various memories that these may bring about. During my childhood I really liked sprinkled doughnuts and milk. I had some good times when friends would come over, but after eating so many one may have to go to the dentist. Haha!)

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Lol, the dentist trips are so true! Loved your Haiku!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Not to mention extra calories and pounds!

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