Visually appealing, however, the content swiftly proves mediocre at best. Accommodating a substantial lack of originality, with predictable plot twists, awful character development, and a final act that will leave even the most easily pleased with a sour taste in their mouths. A complete unadulterated disappointment. Avoid at all costs.
Disclaimer: Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
About the Creator
Sian N. Clutton
A horror and thriller writer at heart, who's recently decided to take a stab at other genres.
I sincerly hope you find something that either touches your soul or scares your socks off.
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Comments (12)
Very good, I know what to look out for now that's for sure 😅
Hah I loved this so creative wish I had thought of it!
Well this was extremely relatable 😁🤪 Great take on the challenge, playing fast and loose with the brief but it's good enough to be able to thumb its nose at things like briefs. 😁
Ah I've been found out, great critique
Lol, I loved this! Excellent review!
Nicely done!
Brilliant very creative!
LOL love the disclaimer!!! Fantastic critique!!!❤️💕
Now I wanna watch this just to see how bad it is 😂😂😂
Haha. This is fantastic. Winner in my book.
Now this is what I call a Critique! Excellent and I agree with you.
Another great twist on this prompt!