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The Woman Who Got Out: Interrogation Splatter

May include extreme violence, language, and graphic activity.

By Rebeca FeierPublished 5 years ago 3 min read
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In a few hours, Jacob had gained his consciousness. He began to panic as he awoke to see Ava holding a shotgun and everyone else dead all around the room. She told him, "Answer me with the complete truth or I will kill you too." He decided it would be wise to do as she asks. He replied, "Ok, what is it that you needed to know?" She lays down her weapon on a coffee table next to her that had been dripping blood off of it for the last few hours. "Who are you involved with? What do they have against you?" She asked him with a serious face. "They call themselves 'The Termites' they are holding my dad hostage and want me to get all my revenge on people in my life who have disappeared whether or not it was their fault," he said. Ava hesitated for a minute. "How come you didn't reveal them? You know who my father is." He sighed, "They could've harmed my father...I don't want to lose him." "I understand..," Ava quickly followed. "Where are they holding your father? Do you know?" "They are holding him in a prison cell at their main building. 1299 Tredence Millton, it's a warehouse," he said. Ava wrote it down in her notebook and put it back in her pocket. She then asked, "Why ask for my daughter when you said you weren't ready to be a father?" He replied, "I was going to kill you, but when you told me you were pregnant I left instead. I thought I would give you the chance to be a mother. " Ava then smiled and said, "In that case let me finish this once and for all." She picked up the shotgun and shot his head off, letting the blood fly everywhere. Overlapping the blood from the other people that she had killed in a fit of rage.

Later that week...

Ava woke at 4:30 AM and got ready to kill all the termites one by one. For being the pests they are. She knew exactly what she was getting into. She grabbed a huge duffle bag from her attic that had been filled with knives and throwing material. Taking it downstairs ready to put it in her car, she caught a glance at a black SUV driving suspiciously slow outside. She drops her things on the couch and pretends to check her mail. She fakes noticing them drive slow, she turns to them and walks up to the window. The driver rolls it down and asks if there is a problem. She says, "Oh, no I just wanted to know if you were new to the neighborhood. I was going to invite you in for some tea." The driver gave his passenger a look and agreed. They parked on the side of the road and followed her inside. She locked the door behind her and whipped out her gun. They quickly reached for their pockets but Ava killed them before they had the chance. Their bodies fell to the ground as Ava went to grab their wallets. She put them in the bag with her notebook that she collected earlier. Then off she went to escalate her plan.

As Ava left with her duffle bag and backpack in hand, she looked down at the bodies one last time before leaving and locking the door behind her. She put her things in the backseat of her car and got in. She stood there for a moment and took a deep breath. She continued to drive to 1299 Tredence Millton, where she knew was considered their headquarters. Having her plan in mind, she parked a few blocks away at a store to avoid being spotted nearby. She walked down closer and closer to the warehouse. With her bags in her hands, she walked up to the door and knocked twice then two more times. They crack the door open and she says, "I got a call, the man said to meet him here for my mission." The door opens all the way, then closes and locks behind her. She looks up and sees a stairway leading up. She starts to walk up the stairs and she sees what looks like the boss. She sets her bags down and looks him in the eye. He asks who she is and she tells him...."WHIPLASH!!" The boss's eyes widen in fear. Trying to keep his voice from shaking he says, "What is it that you need?"

**STAY TUNED FOR PART THREE**

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Rebeca Feier

Thought I'd have a go at this.

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