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The Woman Who Got Out: Murder Mission

Involves dangerous activity, language, and violence.

By Rebeca FeierPublished 5 years ago 5 min read

"AVAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!" Ava is a 17-year old who recently found out she was pregnant. Her mother had heard and wanted to ask who it belonged to, and how this happened.

Ava had just been dumped by her boyfriend, Jacob after he had heard the news of the baby. He claimed he wasn't ready to be a father. But, she took it ever so lightly, without a care in the world. She did care for him, but she caught him cheating with her friend weeks before. She considered herself single from that moment forward.

Her mother then ran into her room and asked what had happened. She told her that she was pregnant and it was Jacob's baby, but he didn't want it. She watched as her mother tried to remain calm in this situation. She managed to hold it together and ask Ava what she planned on doing for the baby. Ava told her mother not to worry and that she could raise the baby on her own. Ava's mother was hesitant, but she agreed to let her do as she pleases. It was after all her baby. Her mother supported her decision and let Ava do what she thought was right for her baby.

9 Months Later......

The baby had just been born and Ava was holding it. Her mother by her side Ava says, "You, my sweet baby will be a Kathrine." Ava turns to her mother as if waiting for her approval. Her mother nods and tells Ava, "What a great name." with tears in her eyes. Kathrine was her grandmother's name, who had died while Ava was still in the womb. Ava looked back at her mother and asked if she would like to hold Kathrine. Her mother nodded and picked up the newborn. Smiling down at the baby, her mother said, "She has your nose and eyes, how precious." Ava smiled and then slowly dozed off into a nap. Her mother looked after the baby for her and waited for Ava to wake.

3 Years Later.......

It was about time for Kathrine's doctor's appointment. "Mommy!! I can't reach my bag." Kathrine said. "Ok I'll get it for you sweety" replied Ava. They had rushed to the car and drove off. As they were nearing the doctor's office Ava had to stop for gas. They started to slow down and Ava went to pay for gas. She left Kathrine in the car, she was asleep in the backseat. By the time Ava got back, Kathrine was missing. There was a note in her car seat that read "I have Kathrine, meet me at the local coffee shop alone tomorrow at 5:30 AM. -Jacob-" She was hesitant but then called her mother. Her mother told her she would have a bodyguard go with her. Ava agreed but told her he had to stay hidden because he asked her to come alone.

The next morning...

"Ava! Over here." Jacob waved her down and asked her to sit. He told her that he missed her, and if she didn't marry him he would kill Kathrine. She said, "I will never marry you! You're a psycho, you kidnapped my daughter and threaten her life. All because you want me to marry you?" His face then turned into a colossal frown full of annoyance. He told her, "Forget marrying me, I'll just keep Kathrine." Ava's body then filled up with loads of anger. Jacob could tell and began to panic. Ava had been very powerful ever since she was young. She once put a man in the hospital using a pencil at the age of 10. Jacob tried to keep the worry of his face, but he turned pale. He told her he would keep Kathrine or she would die. Ava told him, "Your cheating ass dumped me because you weren't ready to be a father! What makes you think I'm going to give her up now?" She stomped out and ran to her car. Angerly she got in and drove off in a rush. Her bodyguard not far behind. She went straight to her father's house and asked him if he could call in a favor or two at the C.I.A to help her find Kathrine. He said, "I would be happy to help, tell me what you need." She replied, "Find out where he hid her and who else was involved if anyone else." He agreed and told her he would call when he got something. Ava went to his garage and took a shotgun and 50cal sniper. She also took two packs of ammo for each gun. She went home and got out a black notebook made of leather from the back of her closet. Inside she started to write down her entire plan.

Later that day her father called.. He said, "Ava, we found where Jacob took Kathrine through the traffic cams. She is at 1748 Wenchings St. There were three other people with him. Face identification got them, Adam Jormon, Jacob Daniells, Kayden Mitchell, and Holden Price." "Thank you dad, I hope you understand what I have to do, and why I must do it alone," she replied. She then finished writing inside the black leather notebook. She grabbed her guns, ammo, notebook, and outfit then left.

She arrived at 1748 Wenchings St. She knocked on the door, but the person who opened was Jacob. She held the shotgun to his chest. He was about to try and warn the others, but she had knocked him unconscious, he fell to the ground. She crept through the door and closed it quietly behind herself. She checked the whole downstairs before she went up. She ran upstairs and saw the other three people involved. They were unarmed, her daughter was sprawled out on the floor in front of them. She had been shot then stabbed multiple times. It broke Ava's heart to see her like this, and it had filled her with anger. She turned to the one before her and shot him in the head. She then turned to the other two and did the same. People came knocking at the door asking for Jacob. She opened it up and hid the gun behind her, she told them that he was handling an intruder. They understood and stepped inside. She slammed the door behind them and then shot their heads as well. She looked at Jacob, who would soon wake up, and she dragged him up the stairs. She took rope they used to tie up her daughter and tied up Jacob.

(!!!! STAY TUNED FOR PART TWO !!!!)

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Rebeca Feier

Thought I'd have a go at this.

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