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Wonderful 'Savages' winners. Thanks to the 64 people who read the story, 23 who left a comment and the 22 who hearted.

But most of all, to the participants: Listed in order of submission: Gerard Dileo, Paul Stewart, C. Rommial Butler, Mike Singleton, KP, Matthew Fromm, and the brave Kelli-Sheckler Amsden, beauty amongst the beasts.

By Novel AllenPublished about a year ago 3 min read
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I tried and tried to pick just one. They were all so great. Please forgive me, I just could not.

So, I picked two to share first place, two to share second place and one third place with two Honorable 'Beastly' wins for the tamer monsters.

I really felt like doing an Oprah Winfrey and saying, 'everybody gets a car', if I could afford even one car, I would.

BTW, I was really hoping to hear some new initiates lend their voices to the exercise of stepping outside of their comfort zones. But, roads lead to roads, we live and hope.

So, I shall humbly again say...THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH, GUYS, for indulging me and taking the time from your activity filled lives and Vocal game of hopscotch to submit a story to the beastly challenge.

I am extremely grateful. All the entries were wonderful, and I seriously thought of skipping town so I wouldn't have to decide on who wins.

The stories all came from different and extremely interesting, eye-opening perspectives, rendering them all aces in my book.

To you, my gratitude unfurls,

Like petals kissed by morning dew.

For kindness shared and laughter hurled,

I offer thanks, sincere and true.

Your presence brightens every day,

A sunbeam through life's cloudy skies.

In whispered words and deeds, you sway,

And in your warmth, my spirit flies.

So here's my humble verse, my friends,

A token of appreciation's art.

For all the moments that we spend,

Thank you—for bringing joy to my heart.

In gratitude's embrace, I find my voice,

To thank you for the kindness you deploy.

Your presence, like a sunbeam through the mist,

Illuminates my days, and I can't resist.

For every smile you've shared, a star aglow,

And every thoughtful word, a river's flow.

Your friendship, like a shelter from life's storm,

Keeps me warm, safe, and free from harm.

So here's my humble verse, a token small,

To say, "Thank you!"—the sweetest words of all.

May joy and kindness follow you each day,

As you light up the world in your own way.

In shared 1st place

Paul...well, I will let him say it for himself:

pay no respects and weep no more for the fallen among us

the beasts of old, of deceptive disguise and serpent lies

whose greed and desire sought to bring you down so low

beyond the eyes, see their disguise, under blood-red skies

driven by want and lust, fueled by untampered surges

roam they did, through the dirt and the mire, inglorious

bastardized conscience, contemptible duplicitous charmless

stalking without a care, without a thought, without care

I particularly loved the 'Inglorious Bastardized' parts, written with his heart and soul.

................

The challenge specifically asked to let the beast loose, and Kelli did so marvelously with her Bellatrix. She embraced her inner monster and together they understand each other.

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In shared 2nd place

C. Rommial took this opportunity to face long forgotten monsters, with his Debauchery, reminding himself of the journey and the highly evolved destination. In facing his past demons, he had finally found closure and the freedom to release them. Finding peace is the gift 'epitome'.

Mike's, The Beast in me, not to be outdone, is a rather more, quiet and subdued beast. Though it roars, he is master of himself and for the most part he has kept it caged. Still, it is the quiet ones of whom we should be aware.

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In 3rd place (giving credence to the Kafka cockroach)

Gerard's growing beast burst forth and just kept growing all the way to Heaven and his God-like existence, and maybe even beyond.

The Honorary Beastly prizes

KP awakened to find himself a koala, alarmed at first, he improvises and types-ish a message to work:

Martha, I apoilogize for the lste notice. I will not be in today. I'm nt feeling well. I'm afraid I hve come down with something quote serious and may nwed to take a few days off from work. I can finosh reports at home, but I will be unsble to attend any meetings remotely.

He decides to accept his fate and make the most of it.

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Matthew Fromm gives us a parasite wearing insults wrapped in outer monstrous smiles. Don't be fooled by the outer appearance...it hides a shallow beast.

Guys, you all did Kafka proud, and in humility and not to compare myself with the Man...You made me very proud too.

Every story is a winner. Thank you all.

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Novel Allen

You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.

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  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    Too many things on my plate this month to handle another challenge, but I am glad to see you get to the Leaderboard!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Ah, this one I really fancied, and just didn't get to it, but I've loved the ones I've read.

  • Latasha karenabout a year ago

    Wow, thanks for the beautiful verse

  • Alyssa wilkshoreabout a year ago

    Nice challenge vruone , and kudos to folks who engage and participate

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    oh...well that gave me an extra big grin this morning. Grazie, Novel, for the creative push, for the shared first place with the prolific and unstoppable Kelli and to be in such a pool of creative beasts! Your lovely poem was very nice too. Well done all round to everyone and thank you again to Novel.

  • Wooohooooo congratulations to all the winners! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊 I'm so sorry, Mr Brain was uncooperative for this challenge 😅

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    Congrats to all those entries!! Can't believe I missed this one! Time to read them all now! 🥰

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    A great and warm poem, Novel. Congrats to all the placements!! 🥳

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    I'm not really.familiar with this one. Can't remember if I saw it or not. That was such a lovely a d thoughtful thank you verse. Congrats to your winners.

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Wow! Great everyone! I have to read them all so I will save this for later or early morning reading. 😉

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    I went to such literary lengths to disqualify myself and yet you honor me! I bow deeply in appreciation, and humbly submit that your invitation to wax philosophical lead to more waxing, on Kafka and matters cognate: https://shopping-feedback.today/bookclub/on-fiction-esoteric-and-philosophical%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E You're an inspiration!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    I am pretty sure I forgot to comment with mine! SORRY! This week has been hectic to say the least. I loved the prompt though, so thank you ☺️

  • Gerard DiLeoabout a year ago

    Thank you for a great prompt that also allowed me to create 1/366th of my Story-a-Day challenge. It's a win-win! And the Lincoln doesn't hurt none, neither! Thanks.

  • kpabout a year ago

    aww thank you for the beautiful and "humble verse." and thank you for the honorable mention ❤️ 'twas fun to be a koala for a time

  • Matthew J. Frommabout a year ago

    great work everyone!

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