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When the River Forgot Mercy

Subtitle: They Went for a Picnic. The River Took Them. The World Looked Away.

By Khalid KhanPublished 7 months ago 1 min read

It was supposed to be a day of joy. The Kareem family—fifteen members, spanning three generations—had set out early that morning for a picnic near the riverbank. Children laughed as they chased each other through the tall grass, elders sipped tea under the shade of a tree, and parents smiled at the rare peace that life seldom offered. No one suspected that the sky above, gray and quiet, was holding back a storm that would soon rewrite their fate. By late afternoon, the winds began to howl. The river, once calm and silver, turned into a roaring beast. Water rushed in with a fury no one had predicted—certainly not the underfunded local weather office, which had failed to issue a proper warning. Within an hour, their picnic spot became an island of stone, surrounded by waves that clawed at their feet like hands desperate to pull them under. They called for help. Again and again. Phones rang unanswered. Emergency lines were jammed. The state’s disaster response team, crippled by poor coordination and a lack of resources, couldn’t even locate them on the map. Officials sat behind desks, watching weather reports with mild concern while lives were slipping beneath water. Night fell. The children cried themselves to sleep in the arms of their parents. Hope faded with every crashing wave. By morning, the river had swallowed the island whole. No bodies were found. No rescue ever came. Just silence. They did not die because nature was cruel. They died because the system was blind.

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