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Some Literary Observations

Introduction
I heard a phrase on "Murder She Wrote" and then thought of how effective phrases can be if they are swapped around. These are just my thoughts so you may tell me I am wrong, but I would love to hear your opinions.
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I was wanting a story to write, but the current Vocal challenges are not an option for me, and the phrase I heard was "The Messengers of Midnight" and I thought that sounded quite mysterious and would be maybe a good title for a story. The AI Image I generated based on that prompt impressed me a lot and I am now thinking there might be a story there.
Then I thought if you switch the words around to become "The midnight Messengers" it just sounds like some late postmen.
Then I thought of The Allman Brothers' song "Midnight Rider" which is a fine song and the one I have chosen for this, but if you switch it around to become "The Rider of Midnight" it then adds a gravitas to it, with a little shade of supernatural mystery.
It is just changing the final noun to be a qualifying adjective so, "A Spoonful Of Sugar" becomes "A Sugar Spoonful" although that does not do much for me.
Conclusion
I would love for you to come up with any ideas and leave them in the comments.
Thank you so much for reading.
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Comments (8)
you are simply the best
"One man's meat is another man's poison - Poison is another man's meat."
Hahahahahhahahaha some late postmen, that was hilarious π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£
Interesting musings, Mike!
I like the way you are thinking here. Not sure Ill get this right but 'A penny for your thoughts ' 'A thought is worth a penny'
The Harbingers of Spring/Spring Harbingers Golden Memories/Memories are Golden
Interesting thoughts. I could play with this idea quite a bit, and could also consider the opposite. For instance, "Time Passages" doesn't seem to have as much impact as "Passages of Time".
The Midnight Ride of Paul Revere becomes Paul Revere's Ride at Midnight. Did I understand what you wanted. Quite creative an makes one think though. Good work.