Spooktacular Dollar Challenge (October Edition 🎃 🕯)
The responses to my September challenge, and a prompt for you for October 🎃
Here's the challenge I set for September:
Dollar Challenge - Country Edition
If you're not familiar with these little prompts from me, let me catch you up.
The idea was to do them monthly, but of course life has a way of happening!
They are quotes that inspired me, or stuck with me in some way. They might be from books, songs, or films. From anywhere, really.
This is the prompt I gave for September:
I'm much too young to feel this damn old
- Garth Brooks
This time, there were six entries, if I've counted up right. One was awarded Top Story, and three had a go at the Stretch challenge: 500 word fiction without the personal pronoun (I).
The Responses
Without further ado, then, here are the entries:
Under the Blood Moon by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
To Never Grow Old by Mike Singleton
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Here are the ones who had a go at the stretch:
Much Too Young - Much Too Old by King Paul
Asphalt Years by Fatal Serendipity
(Apologies - Vocal wouldn't let me embed the links!)
As usual, a shiny silver dollar will be winging its way to my favourites. THANK YOU to absolutely everyone who gave it a go!
Moving on, then, to the challenge for October... and of course it has to be a spooky one, no?
October Challenge
L.C. Schäfer's One Dollar Challenge - Quote Me Baby (Spooktacular Edition)
Hold on to you scrotum, or your hat, or whatever - here comes your prompt:
The Prompt
The dead know only one thing
- "Private Joker", Full Metal Jacket
Mission: Impractical
Your mission (should you choose to accept it) is as usual:
Write me a piece inspired by the quote.
This time, I'm going to give you a few more requirements:
- fiction piece, which is
- spooky/horror themed, and
- frightens the crap out of me!
Stretch!
An exercise to flex your writing muscle:
Use the word selcouth
It's an archaic word meaning strange, unusual, or uncommon. It should feel at home in your piece, so the style should fit.
Them's the rules
Word count: The word count is loosey goosey for this one. I'm pressed for time these days, so I'm only promising to read any that are published in the fiction community, and listed as a 5 minute read or less.
Prize: Same as usual, I'll tip my favourites a dollar each.
Winners: Again, same as always! If there's only a few entries, I'll just pick one or two people. If more than 10 people enter, I'll pick 3. More than 20, I'll pick 5. For the stretch, enough people try it (say, 5), I'll also do a $10 first prize, and $5 second.
Content: You can include the quote, in which case it should feel like it belongs. Or your story can be inspired by it, in which case the link should be clear.
Limits: You can submit as many as you like, but I'm only promising to read the first two that meet the criteria from each person.
Closing date: 11:59PM GMT, Friday 31st October, 2025
Really important: Please do link your story below! I'd be gutted to miss anyone. I'd appreciate it if you could link back to this challenge as well.
Before you go...
If you can think of a quote you think would make a good prompt, let me know! Especially if you can think of a good one for November. I have a few ideas bumbling around in my head. Talk to me in the comments. I'm open to suggestions, and will tip you if I use yours.
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Thank you for reading!
If you took part in the Country challenge, THANK YOU!
If you give this one a bash, THANK YOU!!
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Comments (15)
Silly me, I've been absent so long I forgot you're in the UK! I didn't check the time zone of the deadline until it was too late. 😂 But since I planned to knock out this story this evening, I went ahead and finished it anyway. Thanks so much for the prompt! I'm easing back into writing after a rough year and this really got my wheels turning. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/on-an-evening-walk-past-oakhurst-park%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
I just returned home from an extended voyage in which my writing has been limited to actual pen and paper. I so would have like to have done this challenge. I shall read the entries instead.
Squeaking in with a last minute submission and hoping I dont miss the deadline, lol! This one really got me thinking! https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/dead-still%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here is my Submission, sort of late, but hope you enjoy:) https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/the-corridor-that-remembered-a-record-from-the-faculty-of-forgotten-rooms%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Better late than.... https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/when-the-dead-knocks%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Argh. Sorry. It's coming up as 7-minute read on Vocal. I don't really think it is. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/to-the-dead-we-owe-the-truth%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Sorry.
Interesting...oh geez, another challenge...lets see what jumps. Horror...can't resist.
I enjoy writing horror, so this is right up my alley! I took a crack at it, here's mine: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/i-know-4ifo40fv5%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Off to read everyone else's! :D
Well, I missed the September challenge, dammit. I'll enjoy reading the entries, anyway. I'm a year older as of 4 days ago anyway, and much too old to feel this damn old, so at least I have an excuse. Thanks for dropping another fun prompt. I'll see what I can come up with!
Here is mine https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/down-there%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Aw, thank you, lassie! I enjoyed the last challenge as I have done each of them. This one looks very tricksy. As scares, like funnies, are very subjective. I am up to the task, though. Well done to everyone else and thank you for running these challenges - I don't know about anyone else, but each time they come along I use them as an opportunity to challenge myself and experiment a little. Or to work on things that need tightening in my writing. Either way, you're awesome and so are these challenges!
Yay, another challenge! Thanks for the shoutout, LC!
I don’t remember that quote but love the first half (particularly) of Full Metal Jacket, so was happy to see a reference for the challenge. 😎
Oooh this is interesting - love the quote for inspiration. I might give that stretch challenge a try too!
Thanks for letting us know, I will add this to the October liststory and you will have my entry soon