Wonderland
Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge Day 30

I woke one frost fogged morning
to a staircase
coiling sideways through a lemon drop sky,
the handrail made of back-crossed whispers,
a landing made of gray tile,
shattered by the weight
of broken promises.
***
The door at the top greeted me like an old friend,
smiling in italics,
wood veneer peeling back into a perfect
white-stripped smile,
gold labeled in serifed sincerity,
we all feigned to believe
"all are welcome here"
***
I wore a dress of fractured silver glass,
each shard refracting
a different version of me, unmet.
She smiled from my hip,
wept from my shoulder,
held knives at my knees.
cut deep every time I braved
her mirrored gaze.
***
The moon dangled from strings,
a marionette illuminated by another's light,
humming lullabies in reverse,
existential tones holding
corporate hedgerows, cloned in khaki,
squares of severance,
draped in millennial manila greige,
despondent. irrelevant.
***
Butterflies floated by cracked windows,
whispering riddles the crows gave them,
in a language I almost remembered
from a dream I was never allowed to finish.
***
And love?
it wore the shadows of corners,
veiled in eclipse,
holding a blood red rose,
petals made from the missing hands of clocks,
reminding me, always, of the hour.
***
They had promised me a wonderland...
***
I fled with passed-down lace sails,
doilies nailed to the mast,
harnessing hurricanes, daring them to capsize me
with their huff and their puff.
***
I crashed my keel upon bygone shores,
where peaches grow upon palm trees,
and salt sparkles on sea-drunk lips,
***
and built it from the wreckage.
Author's Note:
Whew! We made it to the end of the challenge my friends! I'd be lying if I said I wasn't misty-eyed over here. It truly has been such a wonderful, beautiful, thrilling journey! I have so loved getting to know you all through your work and through discussion of each other's poems, seeing your inspiration and your takes on the daily prompts. I'm already planning another challenge for July!
For now though - you can submit your work to be considered for the Wonderland Anthology! I'll be choosing the best poem submitted for each of the prompts and putting together an entire book that highlights this fantastic journey together. Find all the details HERE: Wonderland Anthology Submissions
Again - thank you all so much! Cannot wait for the next!
About the Creator
Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb



Comments (11)
Ellie, uploading Docs using Drive is not working for me. My laptop is not working so I’m now only on iOS. I can share the files with you if you send an email.
This is lovely, Ellie. Mine is a little shorter. 😂 Here’s my entry for Wonderland. I can’t believe I made it! 🥳 https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/wonderland-4x68w06ae%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Made it to the end, thank you for hosting this super fun challenge! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/ticking-in-my-pocket%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Hi Ellie, made it. Here is my Day 30 poem: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/wonderland-what-of-the-future%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Thank you so much for putting this together. It was quite an exercise not only for us but also for you as well. It has been very rewarding, and I have learned a lot more about poetry and my writing than I did before the challenge. Thank you. Can't wait to see the final product.
Like Rachel, I’m curious… why did poor little 31st of May get left out of your challenge in May?🥹🤔🙃
Phew! I think I’ve finally caught up, just as the challenge is about to end! What a month! This is my latest poem: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/visiting-christmas-wonderland%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E What a Wonderland poem you wrote! Incredibly vivid. My favourite verse is: “I wore a dress of fractured silver glass, each shard refracting a different version of me, unmet.”✅
Well-wrought! That which is new is always built from what came before. We cannot deny it, and we mustn't get sore. We can only wonder, and wander, through the land and to the door...
Wonderful, building from the wreckage indeed. https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/my-wonderland%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here's my final one: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/wonderland-nx6mf0wib%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Hurrah! Thank you for creating this. I have loved coming along for the ride. I will be submitting some of mine for your perusal although I think you might have read most of them already anyway.
This is some seriously trippy writing! The imagery is wild, like that staircase in a lemon drop sky. It makes me wonder how you came up with all these ideas. I've tried to write creatively, but nothing this out-there. Do you have a process for dreaming up such unique scenarios, or do they just pop into your head? Also, the way you play with language is cool. Like "back-crossed whispers" for the handrail. How do you decide which words to pair up to create these strange yet fitting descriptions? And that ending about building from the wreckage leaves me curious. What kind of new thing is gonna be built?