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Wonderland Poetry Challenge: Day 30 - Senryū

By Susan Fourtané Published 7 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
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Life in Wonderland

She chases what she once was

Past the looking glass.

~~~

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Senryū for Ellie’s Wonderland poetry challenge: Day 30: Wonderland

Senryusurreal poetry

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Susan Fourtané

Susan Fourtané is a Science and Technology Journalist, a professional writer with over 18 years experience writing for global media and industry publications. She's a member of the ABSW, WFSJ, Society of Authors, and London Press Club.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran7 months ago

    This felt a little sad to me. Loved your SenryuA

  • Mother Combs7 months ago

    This is a wonderful Senryu, Susan <3 Really enjoyed your Wonderland Poems <3

  • Tiffany Gordon7 months ago

    🩷 Fabulous work Susan! Congrats on finishing! 🎉

  • Kelsey Clarey7 months ago

    Sometimes short and sweet is the way to go! I think this is a perfect endcap.

  • @Everyone: I wrote many before deciding on this Senryū. Free verse, acrostics, from different character PoV, and I think I am just exhausted. I wanted to just get it done and move on. I wanted the last one to be special but I am exhausted and I’ve run out of ideas. 😳 Thank you to everyone who has followed, supported, and encouraged me during this challenge. It has made a difference to me. 🥰💕🐇🌸

  • Walter Richardson7 months ago

    This poem's imagery is really captivating. It makes me wonder what exactly she's chasing from her past. And that "past the looking glass" bit adds an extra layer of mystery. Have you ever felt like you were chasing a past version of yourself?

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