Like a sky so blue
Like a tall oak tree
With all that I see
And all that is me
I love you
***
With all that I am
And all that I’ll be
I’ll give you my soul
I’ll give you me
I love you
***
You are my muse
You are my poem
You are my life
You are my home
I love you
***
With each tear that falls
Upon this page
I feel your love
As we age
I love you
***
Each word I’ve said
Each tear I’ve shed
I give to you
***
As we grow old
All my soul
I give to you
***
My girl, my wife
All my life
I give to you
***
With each word you have said
Each tear you have bled
You held my hand
And made me a man
For this
I Love You
*****
About the Creator
Gerald Holmes
Born on the east coast of Canada. Travelled the world for my job and discovered that kindness is the most attractive feature in any human.
R.I.P. Tom Brad. Please click here to be moved by his stories.
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Comments (9)
Lovely & loved it!!!♥️♥️💕
Awwww, this was deep! Beautiful couple.
Love the poem. Love the picture. I hope you shared this with her.
Awww, this was so lovely and wonderful! I loved it!
Beautifully written. I adore how you described your tears of gratefulness and all of her tears too. I really felt your feelings here
Aww, that is beautiful. Well done.
That was really well written
Oh, this is beautiful, Gerald! You said so much within the constraints of the challenge! Too many lines to highlight, but I love "You are my poem." So very well done!
Beautiful piece and I’m sure she loved 🥰 this ‼️