Why So Reactive?
When Chemistry Feels Too Personal! ;)
When the bond is ionic; electrons must be shared apart,
Can't there be LOVE in chemistry, where no atom breaks its HEART?
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Elements collide; their reactions align,
Why must everything CHANGE, refusing to stay FINE?
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When there's ACID, a BASE comes through,
When I wrote 'REACTANTS,' it said, "Write PRODUCTS too."
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Why must opposites PULL or REPEL? Can anyone define?
Why can’t compounds exist without breaking the design?
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What starts as a spark can combust into FIRE,
Who made "ENERGY"? Why does it always expire?
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ENTROPY rules chaos; can’t order ever shine?
I yearn for a BALANCE, a bond that feels divine.
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Life’s molecular DANCE, the bond’s fragile design,
Why must it all DISSOLVE, leaving nothing to enshrine?
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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Bruce Lee and The God of War: Kuan Ti
It starts with love.. The Power to the God Of War and Wealth Walk into a Chinese restaurant (even in Oklahoma, USA), a Chinese police station, a kung fu martial arts studio or even a Chinese temple and you often see a red faced warrior holding a heavy quan-do (spear like weapon).
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Comments (18)
It always makes me wonder from where did you take these images for your stories? Beautifully written.
Oh, I love what you've done here, Komal! I enjoy the chemistry elements so much :) Relatable and compelling work :)
As A person who has a chemistry degree, I love this poem so much, love the symbolism between love and chemistry. Excellent writing. And the poem is relatable as well.
Amazing, Komal! As a science nerd, I really enjoyed the parallels between chemistry and real life. Great job!
Definitely a brilliant one 😯 thanks for sharing.
This is life-hacked chemistry. The answer is 'cause we are sons and daughters of chemistry father.
The questions you pose, exploring the nature of change, balance, and entropy, invite deep reflection on both scientific principles and the human condition.
Woww, this was deep and incredibly written! I love the way you format your writing! Love this, Komal! 💌🌟
Whoaaaa, this was so profound and thought provoking! I loved it!
Very creatively brought out! Nice job! Profound!
Wow! Well this certainly caused a reaction in me 😉 what a fun twist for a poem.
Well done! Fantastic writing!
Well said. Life is about balance! That's how opposites coexist.
This poem beautifully connects chemistry to the fragility of love and life. The longing for balance and permanence resonates deeply, making every line poignant and relatable.
This poem is such a clever take on chemistry and the emotional turmoil it mirrors! You’ve turned the science of bonds and reactions into a deep, reflective journey. Love the mix of humor and introspection! Very relatable :)
Really enjoyed reading this ♦️
Ooooh what an explosion of beauty and fantastic words! Loved this. It makes me want to study some more elements of chemistry.
Woah! I loved the concept... 🤩 I mean I can still understand this much Chemistry 😃 So, The poem was so relatable 😉 When the bond is ionic; electrons must be shared apart, Can't there be LOVE in chemistry, where no atom breaks its HEART?" best one gurl! ✨ I enjoyed the poem 😆😃🤝