UNSEEN, Yet Always Felt!
Can you miss someone you never met?
Can you miss someone you NEVER met,
A soul unknown, a deep regret?
A whisper in a dream you’ve caught,
A BOND unspoken, but still sought.
~ ~ ~
Their smile’s a memory you never shared,
Yet in your heart, it’s always THERE.
Like sunlight slipping through your hands,
A fleeting warmth, like shifting sands.
~ ~ ~
You feel their presence in the breeze,
In quiet moments, in rustling leaves.
A LAUGH you’ve never heard, yet known,
A love that’s felt but not yet shown.
~ ~ ~
Can you MISS them? Oh, you can,
In every HEARTBEAT, you’ll understand.
Sometimes the people we long for the most
Are the ones we’ve never truly known.
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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Comments (28)
Ahhh! Why your poems always hit hard. This is damn real.☺️
Yes Yes Yes! So true!
Love it 🥰 it is so deep and heartfelt.
Impressive 🥰
Beautiful ♥︎♥︎♥︎
Oh yes! 🙌 this is breathtakingly beautiful in every shape and form. I couldn’t agree more with every line of this one! 😊
Ohhh! This is hella relatable :)
Reading this made me pause and reflect deeply—it’s as if you’ve put into words a feeling I’ve always carried but could never articulate. Truly, this is hauntingly beautiful and resonates with that bittersweet longing for something, or someone, that feels like a missing piece of the soul. Outstanding work!
Oh I love this. It was so deeply relatable. I can feel the longing. It’s dreamy, it’s nostalgic it’s everything I could ever hope for in a wholesome poem. Speaking of the purity in caring; in loving and in hoping for someone you’ve never met. Never truly known. Outstanding work Komal, as always I am swept off my feet, and it’s dangling on edge of this cloud I am on. 👌🏽👏🏽🤗♥️
It resonates deeply, exploring the mysterious connections we can feel towards souls we've never encountered physically, yet seem to know intimately.
Congratulations dear ❤ Your sincere comments have rooted so many people... 😃✨
Awesome and you definitely can
This is beautiful and relatable, LOVED it!
Wow Komal, loved it!💕✨ That is such a true poem, and I think everybody has felt this particular feeling once in a while.🥺 Beautifully done!💕
So true, Komal.
I love your poem! 💕
Love the cadence of this and I think almost everyone can relate to this feeling. Beautiful, well done.
Omgggg, this is soooo freaking true! I loveeeeee how eloquently you've described it!
Truely heartfelt and thought-provoking! Wonderfully done, Komal! 💌🌟
Beautifully-penned!
Real feeling
I love rhyming poetry when its got a sing song rhythm. I always want to hear what the author thinks of in their mind as the sound of them poem; have you considered recording it and adding it to your article?
This is extremely relatable to me. Reminds me of my father. Great writing!
This is so beautifully written—it perfectly captures the bittersweet feeling of longing for an unknown connection. It really resonates with me!
Yes you can. Take Vocal for example! We miss familiar people who comment on our work!