In sorrow and rain,
How do you tell, where tears end,
And the rain begins.
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Luke Foster
Father. Failed husband. Wannabe writer.
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If You Love Me, You'll Do It
I met Jason when I was five years old. I could say that I loved him from the moment I saw him. He was so handsome to me and I felt in awe by his presence. When they introduced him as the new kid in school, I wanted to be his friend right away. I remember it like it was yesterday. I remember his smile and how he didn't seem shy. He appeared confident and ready to learn. I waved at him and said "hello," before anyone else could even say a word. He sat next to me, and I asked him if he wanted to be friends. He looked so happy as he said, "Yes!"
By Sidney Smith (Sid Smith)7 days ago in Fiction
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THIS IS TRUE!
This is brilliant.
Beautiful! This made me think of “Rainy Days and Mondays” by the Carpenters.
Very poignant and profound. I loved it!
oh, my heart
Luke, that was amazing!!! Love it!!!♥️♥️💕 If you have a minute, check out my latest Limerick, TEEN SPIRIT.
My tears are endless and salty! Great work!