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Scars

By C. Rommial ButlerPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
Viktor Vasnetsov: Knight at the Crossroads

Why must so many years pass

to heal a wound

it took only a day to make?

We wear our scars like a badge

but who wants to be

the Sherriff of Stupidtown?

To yearn for the day

when there are no more

guns in the valley,

to know that our children

are safe so we can just

ride into the sunset

or die among the trees—

is that too much to ask?

Rather than seek in vain

the means to disappear,

let us learn to leave no scars.

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C. Rommial Butler

C. Rommial Butler is a writer, musician and philosopher from Indianapolis, IN. His works can be found online through multiple streaming services and booksellers.

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  • JBaz3 months ago

    As true a statementt as there will ever be. I like how you seem to put so much of yourself in every piece you create.

  • L.C. Schäfer4 months ago

    You always put all your weight behind it, don't you 😁

  • Babs Iverson6 months ago

    Awesome, C!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Tim Carmichael6 months ago

    You are an amazing poetry writer. The art of storytelling and making it sound poetic, you have nailed it.

  • Tiffany Gordon6 months ago

    Powerful work CRB! Well said my friend!

  • L.I.E7 months ago

    Lovely poem. A beautiful lesson in it that everyone should follow.

  • Beautifully written! That last line brings it all together, let us learn to leave no scars. Something that seems so easy, yet so hard to accomplish. Fantastic work as always!

  • D.K. Shepard7 months ago

    The opening lines/question set the stage magnificently! Excellent poem, Rommi!

  • Euan Brennan7 months ago

    Well-wrought, Rommi! This poem hits seriously deep, and I really hope you're doing well. It's so sad that pain takes so much time to pass when it can hit us so fast. "Let us learn to leave no scars" - a lesson for the world.

  • That last line was so deep. I wish all of us can follow that. Loved your poem. I was so happy to see something new from you

  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    Oh, I wish we could learn. Beautiful piece, Rommi. I read your article as well. Excellent work. No comment left, as I don't have an account.

  • John Cox7 months ago

    These are scary days with more candidates volunteering for the surprisingly coveted role of sheriff of stupid town than are easily counted. Your poem is filled with longing for a better world for our children. I wish it could be so but wisdom seems to have abandoned this land for short term gain. Beautiful writing; painful reality, Rommi!

  • Sean A.7 months ago

    Some great final lines, well done!

  • Mark Graham7 months ago

    Exactly, do you think this would ever happen for real. Good job.

  • Mother Combs7 months ago

    Wonderful, Charles <3 Love it <3 When I was a teen, I once read about the results of a study in the newspaper that it takes 7 positive actions to correct one negative action performed on a person. I've always tried to be one of the positves in peoples lives, if I could, every since

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