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The Golden Rose

A Poem

By Mother CombsPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

Legend has it

There’s a golden rose

That if you can find it,

And give it to your steadfast love

Then they’ll be yours forever

So I set out to find the golden rose

I traveled near and far

To find one to give to my love

I looked high and low

Under and over

I was just deciding that

The golden rose was just a myth

When I saw a golden glow

From the least expected place

Up ahead and under a sycamore tree

I found that which I was looking for

So, I found one that

Was just starting to bud

And I picked a golden rose

For my true love

I headed back to see

If the legend were true, you see

To find my true love in the arms of another

Was the last thing I desired

So I guess it was all a myth after all

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Mother Combs

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  • Anna 2 years ago

    Another beautiful poem! Well done!🥰

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is a beautiful piece, and I love that artwork.

  • I would have taken that beautiful rose for myself and left my “true love” high and dry. What a sad and unexpected ending! Very well told.

  • Daphsam2 years ago

    Wow, just a totally storyteller!!!!!!

  • I would have shoved that rose up his nose! Take that! Okay I gotta calm down. Loved your poem!

  • Ha you hood winked me with that ending I was expecting their love to last forever. Great poem

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    Is it a myth or it’s rare find ? Love this poem and the deep message I find in it .

  • Nice unexpected ending. Nice work.

  • Kenny Penn2 years ago

    Oh man, gut punched! Did not see that ending coming. Wonderful poem Mother Combs!

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Oh, ugh! that creep! Loved this!

  • Test2 years ago

    Great poetry and photo

  • I searched & searched until I found it. Alas, it was already in her hands, gifted to her by another.

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